BelShe: Thats pretty nice. I liked everything about it except the way you got into the pose and your first punch. I wish you could like jump from a farther distance and then hit him with a straight punch but if your gonna try that try not to look stiff. 8/10 good job though
Zero: That skeet was okay it could've been way cooler if you did it from a farther distance you know? If your closer its easier to decap them and stuff. 9.5/10
Anyways here's an old spar I made it's just me beating up uke with constant punches.
Zero: That skeet was okay it could've been way cooler if you did it from a farther distance you know? If your closer its easier to decap them and stuff. 9.5/10
Anyways here's an old spar I made it's just me beating up uke with constant punches.
KenGee's replay thread of Cookies
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First freestyle parkour, its really short. CnC?
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Oops forgot replay lmao XD
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Oops forgot replay lmao XD
Last edited by keoni109; Mar 22, 2012 at 12:43 AM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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KenGee - The run you did was a little stiff in the arms. Once you go to uke, the punches flowed nicely together, but some were a little twitchy. You lost your balance soon after you threw the third punch and let your legs flop down. Try to keep balance at all times, especially when you want to do a punch combo. The pose was okay. The main thing that really is lacking is that uke looked like a tree until the first punch you threw. It's quite boring having only one player move and the other takes a beating. Try to move both uke and your player simultaneously.
Keoni - The spins were nice, but got kinda repetitive. Try doing some more tricks like a gainer or a backflip. The landing after you fall off the bar thing is a little unrealistic. I kinda don't like the opener or the other kick jump once you land after the first jump. The landing once you get off the platform looked a bit strange and stiff. Now, that the flaws are done, I'll talk about the good things. :3 I liked how smooth you transitioned through each obstacle. The spins were very clean and smooth as well. You have a lot of flow going too. It was nice, but try adding some more flare to your tricks, and work a little bit on the realism in your jumps.
Okay, first replay in a long time. I know I should've done more, but, hey, I'm rusty. :P
Keoni - The spins were nice, but got kinda repetitive. Try doing some more tricks like a gainer or a backflip. The landing after you fall off the bar thing is a little unrealistic. I kinda don't like the opener or the other kick jump once you land after the first jump. The landing once you get off the platform looked a bit strange and stiff. Now, that the flaws are done, I'll talk about the good things. :3 I liked how smooth you transitioned through each obstacle. The spins were very clean and smooth as well. You have a lot of flow going too. It was nice, but try adding some more flare to your tricks, and work a little bit on the realism in your jumps.
Okay, first replay in a long time. I know I should've done more, but, hey, I'm rusty. :P
That replay was pretty cool. The first part of the opener was a bit stiff. First kick nice. You got a core on that. Skeet was cool I just wish you could've done something cooler with that skeet but nice job. 9/10 Here's a WIP on my new replay opener was made by Tamakuu the rest is by me. I'm trying to throw the upper body in the air and do an awesome spin kick to boom it.
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And the part where I grab uke and kick him at the end is there because I got bored xD.
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And the part where I grab uke and kick him at the end is there because I got bored xD.
Last edited by KenGee; Mar 22, 2012 at 02:26 AM.
Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
KenGee's replay thread of Cookies
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Holy crap, first kick was devestating lol. Anyways, just incase you get a bad grab which makes it hard to kick since your hand gets in the way, try to let go and regrab in an area that makes it easier to dm uke. Btw when u getting in ORMO?
I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals
And hopefully i will develop my own style 
