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That was a nice fast replay bro. The opener was pretty cool and the punch was excellent! The spin you did started okay but when both glutes were extended from frame 350 to 330 it looked odd and ugly, it would of looked nice if one was contracted. The walk you did also was a bit odd and looked kind of unrealistic, your pose however looked pretty nice in my opinion. I would of enjoyed the replay even more if you did some more damage to obliterate uke, but it was still awesome bro and I enjoyed it. Overall the starter, pose and hits were great. Keep practising and you will become a master ;)

8/10
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Last edited by Umbre; Jul 9, 2011 at 09:49 PM.
hi.
That's amazing! Your top speed reached 53(whatever units this is)! the most I ever got was 45.
on the constructive side:
The acrobatics were amazing, tori actually looked at uke at the end, which was interesting. The one thing I think is worth noting, you've head more than enough to time to still reach uke, and deliver a kick or elbow(or punch). also, the spin at the beginning looked really weird and awesome at the same time(it looked like your legs did a full 180° while your upper body didn't move. 9/10, great acrobatics, but it's nine since I like replays with at least a hit or 2, and since this has none, it loses a point.

My replay is a "staged" headpunch. it's a really weak headpunch, and since I saw it was so weak, I decided to add special effects(read: uke flying back).
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I disliked the punch.
The replay was all that punch wich was slow and you hardly hit the head, i don't know why you did moved uke to makes him fall after the punch and isn't like "special effect", you could moved other joints like contract your legs or something to get a decent angle to hit uke's neck and no decap made me feel sad
The replay itself was only the punch so you could make the frames shorter, and you fall after a few amount of frames.6/10
Also less hold.
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I did my first movement with over 50 on the sm thingy, and got a 60.29 kick
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parai com activamento de coutinho decunfiado com estraça que brila enquanto rebolade de carro do pinto do nada
First of all I loved the opener, and the boom hit was just amazing and fluid, but after that I was expecting that skeet to dismember something, and then you went into a relax all/ drunk stage and then it felt like you gave up on the replay because you just flopped on the ground, when you should have made him do a flip, epic stance, or at least did a cool pose but you didn't. If you did some of these changes it would be a 11/10, but sadly you did not so you get a 8.9/10 from me, but before that, I was O.O. So keep up the great work because this is a really good replay.

Here is a cool kick I made.

PS: The speed of that kick was only 59.90
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Last edited by MrJingles; Jul 22, 2011 at 11:55 PM.
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I have some concerns of your replay

The opener lacked something. I dont know what it was but it made it slower than i thought it would be. Something that really annoyed the hell out of me is that you moved uke before the kick. Ok that is not right at all. Im sure if you do some editing you might get the same boom without moving ukes neck. Maybe even better. I didnt like how you decapitated uke. You kind of hugged him then his neck just fell off. One thing that i really liked was the boom when you threw ukes head to his crotch. That boom was very nice and just made me smile. I also liked how fast you got into your pose. Like right after you threw ukes head you just fell to your pose. It had a decent amount of speed. And in general. It was a fairly decent kick and skeet boom

I give it a 7/10

Heres me at my finest. Had to notepad it for some minor changes. (less frames, self damage one(long story, wouldnt work, you'll know why i put it one once you see it))
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RIP [duck] Aug 28 2011 - April 20 2020
Well to start it off, your opener was ugly in my opinion.. It was to much of a noob move you would use in Judo. The run just after it was pretty cool though, it had good style and looked fluid. Your first hit was a nice boom but if you ask me lacked style and could of been better, after that it all just got sloppy and disgusting for most of it.. The hits were nice but you just didn't have that special style which is what I like in replays.

7/10
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Join Date: Jul 2011
Holy cow!
That was amazing, the jump was perfectly aimed and the booms were just incredibly well put together.
The flow of the replay was awesome too, I really can't find that much fault in this replay...
Perhaps you could've worked on the landing a bit, it took you quite a while to stand back up after you did that last hit, but that's only a really minor thing. This replay is beyond me by miles!
9.9/10!

It makes mine look kinda crap...
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Last edited by Neurosis01; Jul 28, 2011 at 07:23 PM.
This replay is very good for a blue belt, not crap.

First off, I really loved the opener it looks awesome but, I think it would be better to try to get a boom to the body with the first kick because then you could have more time to do more awesome things, or you could try to get a boom with that cool punch. But I really liked the fluidity of this replay, but I think your ending pose took too much time and I didn't really like your ending pose. So if you took my advice and did some of these suggestions I think your replay would triple in awesome, but for now a 7.5/10

here is something I just whipped up for OC36
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Last edited by MrJingles; Jul 31, 2011 at 01:55 PM.
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That was quite the deal.

The opener was alright, I was just uncertain of the little squat on about 420 - 390 frames. The first kick's "loading" looked a little like you forced the uke to move maybe even a little too much, but the actual kick was fine. But first thought it would have seperated the other leg off too. The two dismembering hits after that were looking good. But the last kick was not as good as the ones before, since you were lying on the floor. A little work on the final pose wouldn't have hurted you either.

I have not critized people much, so I won't decide a number rate. But it was a good replay in my opinion.

And here you go.

%Clay - Predator.rpl
Last edited by clayspade; Aug 20, 2011 at 11:43 AM.
I honestly can't come up with a clever signature.
The opener was ok, but I didn't like the first split at all. Right after you hit him, you contracted your knee instead of going all the way through. Though I differ on the decap... It was nice, and powerfull. It was a great, speedy hit, which I love. But on the way back down. You seemed to move a lot, jerking around to get into position. It's really unnecessary, and would look much better if you let it be. But it was a pretty nice pose at the end.

This is my first replay after a while... meh...
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