Toribash
Goddamit noone would CnC )':

Anyways I should just post another replay, haven't done 9.82 gravity for a long time.
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The opener looked really cool nice job.

The transition could be look a little bit more smooth (relax your knees)

First hit was nice, and the next hit was fast I liked it.

Next hit was nice really clean and really fast but your leg was a bit stuff.

Decap kick was fun and cool.

The little bit after that was um very stiff, but the final pose was just great.

Things to work on:

Work on your overall movement and transitions in this replay, the hits were great but great movement and nice transitions are like icing on the cake.
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Not a fan of the opener nor the grab at the beggining. It made up for a meh kick, didn't look solid
The punch to back kick transition looked pretty cool, as well as the hits themselves
The decap didn't have any power, should have conserved momentum
Good pose, but the transition was very akward
oh yeah
Well, stiff opener.
First kick looked good, it was destructive but not looked powerful.
The punch was okay, the next kick was also okay, decap was nice, loke stylish.
Transition to the pose was stiff and the pose was great.
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Originally Posted by MrJingles1 View Post
The opener looked really cool nice job.

The transition could be look a little bit more smooth (relax your knees)

First hit was nice, and the next hit was fast I liked it.

Next hit was nice really clean and really fast but your leg was a bit stuff.

Decap kick was fun and cool.

The little bit after that was um very stiff, but the final pose was just great.

Things to work on:

Work on your overall movement and transitions in this replay, the hits were great but great movement and nice transitions are like icing on the cake.

Thanks for the CnC.
Yeah, I don't have a style yet, but I'm working on it.

Originally Posted by pusga View Post
Not a fan of the opener nor the grab at the beggining. It made up for a meh kick, didn't look solid
The punch to back kick transition looked pretty cool, as well as the hits themselves
The decap didn't have any power, should have conserved momentum
Good pose, but the transition was very akward

Thanks for the CnC.

Originally Posted by 17april View Post
Well, stiff opener.
First kick looked good, it was destructive but not looked powerful.
The punch was okay, the next kick was also okay, decap was nice, loke stylish.
Transition to the pose was stiff and the pose was great.

Thanks alot, I'll check your thread when I have time.

Originally Posted by Drekz View Post
5/10 on most of them, they were pretty decent.

I bet you didn't even watch the replay. Oh well, thanks.

I still need more comments until I finish my current replay.
I did watch the replays for your information this is just my opinion just because I gave you a decent vote doesn't mean I didn't even bother too watch.]I watched only the first two btw
Last edited by Drekz; Oct 17, 2012 at 09:53 PM.
First step was akward
The semi manip was okay, and so was the kick, it had a nice transition
The glute punch looked a bit strange, and I think that the next kick had a great setup but you didn't use it very well
The head skeet was alright, pretty close range
oh yeah
First step could use a little work.

The manip hits were okay, but it's really hard to manip in -30 as you know. The transition to the kick was nice.

The glute punch was unexpected, though something about it looked off. I think it would be better if you grabbed him with that hand after and kicked with the other leg.

Transition to the next kick was relatively fast, but you could make a bigger boom or something nice.

Skeet was slow, but the pose was cool.

Try working on your movements, they weren't bad, but you can do better ;o

Also I laughed so hard at the name.
Last edited by MrJingles; Oct 21, 2012 at 03:12 PM.
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