[TPC] Story Creation Contest! (Page 4)

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Jak

Oct 16, 2012

Jak

Join Date: May 2011

Oct 16, 2012

[TPC] Story Creation Contest!

Oh My God!!!!! What is this story we speak of... Well people, its a story creation contest. We want you guys, the people, to make us a freaking story!!! Yeah that's right, a story!!! There are prizes too!!! Oh god, bet you are all having an orgasmic attack right now. DON'T WORRY THOUGH! In this story, there is a medic... I think...

Okay on a serious note, ThePieClan wants you guys to make a story for us. It doesn't have to relate to us, but the more relative it is the better chances it has of placing. Also, just to hint at something, if you use the people in ThePieClan as characters, you may have even better chances at placing! So yeah... Pretty much it... MEDIC!!! WE NEED A MEDIC!!! TO MANY ORGASMIC ATTACKS!!! Be creative, be scary (since you know, our anniversary is in Halloween), and be AWESOME!!!

Rules:

Plagiarism is not tolerated, any story that is Plagiarized will be disqualified and not able to enter. Hence disqualification.
There are no limits to the stories, but try to make them scary since Halloween is coming up
No stealing other peoples ideas, if one has a superbearmonsterfrog I don't want to see that in another story. First story will get credited with the creativity and idea.
Use proper grammar.
You are allowed 1 entry, but you may swap it at any time before the deadline.
IT HAS TO BE MADE FOR THIS CONTEST! No Pre-written ones.

Judges:

Beta
PieGod
Azuremage
Cozzakilll

Prizes:

First: 20k
Second: 10k
Third: 4k

The deadline for your stories are on November 24th. You have some time, use it to your advantage.

Last edited by Jak; Oct 16, 2012 at 11:54 PM.

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Jak

Oct 21, 2012

Jak

Join Date: May 2011

Oct 21, 2012

Dude, I loved it. Not because I fucking got everybody killed or anything. But it is truly creative. I would totally love if you extended on it... Was just a really nice creative story. <3

cozzakilll

Oct 21, 2012

cozzakilll

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Join Date: Jun 2010

Oct 21, 2012

That's a bit funny. He makes good pies so Fivah isn't evil my eyes. Good story ;P.

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I don't check the forums or go in-game anymore, I have quit.

zenzen213

Oct 21, 2012

zenzen213

Senior Member

Join Date: Jul 2012

Oct 21, 2012

I love posting W.I.P's
Please tell me what you think Beta.
I think your opinion matters most for some reason.

I love postin them W.I.P's

It all started a few months ago from this very day. My name is Betard Roshark, Beta for short. Right now I don't have much time. I need you to read my story and do what you are supposed to do.
First I have to tell you my story. My friends Johnny and Largo were horsing around with me in my basement those few months ago. I turned around as soon as I head the word "OUCH!" I went over to see what happened. I saw Largo on the floor, and something next to his foot.
I helped Largo up, and then I asked "What did you trip on?" Largo replied "I don't know, but it seemed it appeared out of nowhere." I leaned down and examined the mysterious object, it seemed to be some kind of handle. "I think it's a doorway" Johnny said.
I tugged on the door's handle but it did not budge. "Look!" Johnny said, "There's a keyhole" he added. We looked and looked for the key but we did not find it. All of a sudden, my hands started tingling, and my eyes felt weird.
"Ummm, Beta, your eyes are glowing and your hands are glowing as well." Largo said, "It seems as something is happening as your hands are glowing." he added. "I see something, something flashing, in the shape of a.... KEY!!" I said, surprised at everything that is happening.
"I see a house, WAIT A MINUTE!" I yelled. "THAT'S MY HOUSE" I added. "I see my house's...... BACK, THE KEY IS IN THE BACK!" I shouted excitedly. As soon as I figured it out, the flasing and the visons and the glowing just.....stopped. We all ran outside and went to the spot where I saw my house from.
"I don't see anything here." Largo said. "Maybe it's underground?" Johnny said, wondering. We all decided to start digging with the shovel I use for my garden work. It took us a while, but we finally uncovered the key, and we all then dashed to the basement and put the key in the lock.
It turned very slowly, and made a louse creaking noise like an old wooden door. When it finally opened, we all stared in amazment, as there was a blood red doorway right in front of us down a hall from where we were crouched down in my basement. We all stepped inside the doorway to the dark, gloomy hallway that leaded to the treacherous doorway that loomed ahead.
"What's inside there?" I asked, clueless. "There's only one way to find out, even though I know we all won't like it." Largo said. We all crept inside to the hallway that was pitch dark except for the doorway with such slight light I couldn't even move without bumping into Johnny or Largo. We finally reached the doorway and we heard horrible screams and moans coming from the inside.
I swallowed and a lump stuck in my throat. We all slowly opened the door to find a dark red room, and as soon as we went into the room, the door crumbled into pieces. "No way out now." Largo said. We all had to continue this, as we had no choice but what lied ahead. Johnny and Largo crept forward, followed by me, to the dark and dangerous door that was ahead of them.
We then all stumbled into the room to find 2 pathways that split. "How are we gonna find the right way, if there even is a right way?" Johnny asked. We all decided that we should check both paths by walking down one and then coming back through and walking through the other. But as soon as we cramped into the narrow tunnel the ground just merged together, blocking our entrance.
"Well, again there is no way out." Johnny said. We had no choice again, but to go forth into the dark pathway ahead. We all were obviously frightened, as our skin was pale, and our hands were trembling. The farther we walked, the more scared we got, and the darker it became. After a long time of walking, we started to see light, and it started to grow brighter, and brighter.
We soon then came to a stop, as we reached the source of the light. There was a tunnel with light leading into it. We all decided to walk to the light source. We walked down the tunnel with the light shining through the little tunnel. We soon reached the source of the light, which was a campsite with the light source, which was a very bright lamp, and another one next to it.

mindless machine

Smiter

Oct 21, 2012

Smiter

SMITE ME OH MIGHTY SMITER

Join Date: Feb 2011

Oct 21, 2012

Originally Posted by Beta

Dude, I loved it. Not because I fucking got everybody killed or anything. But it is truly creative. I would totally love if you extended on it... Was just a really nice creative story. <3

Will do thanks.

Prologue

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

I don't know if you guys would want me to post more or not.
If you don't mind having me make this longer let me know.
You guys also ran out of active members D: I had to use me instead.

Last edited by Smiter; Oct 21, 2012 at 08:00 AM.

zenzen213

Oct 21, 2012

zenzen213

Senior Member

Join Date: Jul 2012

Oct 21, 2012

Originally Posted by ninja684

Will do thanks.

Prologue
A long time ago in a town named Morbon lived most wicked creature of all, Fivah. Fivah being a demon had to work in hell at some times. So Fivah could only return every 50 years on Halloween to wreak havoc in Morbon. On halloween 1950 an angel named beta stopped Fivah's terror. Only to realize that it would only make it worse the next time he showed up.

Chapter 1
The mayor, Piegod, was decorating the streets during October waiting for Halloween. The police chief, Gradeger, was helping along with his new recruits n8t and bostaff. When suddenly a preacher came out trying to warn people of Fivah and that they should leave town. Gradeger though he was trying to start havoc himself so he arrested him.

When asked his name he responded rot3ex a 76 year old man. Being the only one who survived the attack 50 years ago. Everyone thought the man was crazy, so they had him placed in a mental asylum.

Chapter 2
The night before Halloween all the roads have been decorated. All citizens had gone to bed so they can stay up the next night. At 12:00 a loud explosion hit dead center of town. It woke the whole town from there sleep. Piegod looked out his window and saw Fivah walking past his window.

Suddenly Rot3ex got a call at the asylum, it was Piegod. Rot3ex was rushed to Piegod's house to see what happened. Piegod was frantic to see if there was a way Fivah's terror could be stopped. There was only one way to stop it and Rot3ex would not explain.

Chapter 3
All rot3ex said was to have him brought to Fivah, so it was done. When they got there rot3ex said to have all the citizens brought to him. When they all got there he told them to form a human circle around Fivah. Fivah started to to get furious and threw balls of fire at rot3ex, they were running out of time. Suddenly rot3ex had them chant 3 names, Beta, Morbon, Fivah. For it to work all of them had to chant at the same time.
After a few minutes Beta had returned to kill Fivah. The fight was amazing, at the end Beta killed Fivah, but there was a prize to pay. The whole town of Morbon and all of it's citizens had died.

Chapter 4
Since Fivah was the devil's prized demon devil was pissed. The time was 6:40 pm and all the kids were out trick or treating. Suddenly the bottom of the grand canyon burned away and hell broke lose. Since Morbon was the place of Fivah's death the devil went there personally when he arrived he did hundred's of rituals with the dead bodys until God came down for the final battle. When God arrived he brought 3 angles quilava, drink12, and ninja684. His most prized angels.

Chapter 5
The devil laughed knowing that the whole world was being destroyed by hell. Little did he know Jesus was was working on stoping the madness. Then a storm erupted, but this was not a normal storm it was a of outstanding proportions. God called it the p.i.e. storm. Why? No one knows for sure. Then the fight had started devil was pinned by ninja684, drink12, and quilava. God was doing the only thing he knew that would kill devil, drawing crosses all over his body and then cutting out his heart.

Chapter 6
What God didn't know is that Devil brought his son, the anti-christ. The anti-christ was stronger then the 3 angles alone. He obliterated ninja684, drink12, and quilava. Then it was the devil and anti-christ vs God, an unfair match many said. The fight was amazing, but half way through it God was losing. Suddenly Jesus appeared. Since the devil already had all the crosses on his body all they had to do was kill him, but that was easier said then done. The fight lasted one week, but at the end God killed the devil and Jesus killed the anti-christ. Since the devil died so did all of the evil that he had spawned.

I don't know if you guys would want me to post more or not.
If you don't mind having me make this longer let me know.
You guys also ran out of active members D: I had to use me instead.

It's up to Beta about more story, but I think that was a downright good story.

mindless machine

Jak

Oct 21, 2012

Jak

Join Date: May 2011

Oct 21, 2012

Ofc i wanna read more. also zen i like. It is very detailed

Ninja. You can still use the characters Beta, God and whatever . they didn't die :P.

zenzen213

Oct 21, 2012

zenzen213

Senior Member

Join Date: Jul 2012

Oct 21, 2012

Originally Posted by Beta

Ofc i wanna read more. also zen i like. It is very detailed

Ninja. You can still use the characters Beta, God and whatever . they didn't die :P.

It is supposed to be detailed
I always put detail.
ALWAYS.
Well, back to writing and thinking and erasing and endless madness.

mindless machine

Jak

Oct 21, 2012

Jak

Join Date: May 2011

Oct 21, 2012

I judge Creativity more then the detail. The creativity in allllll the stories are tremendous, specially the one thats piegods password is betandhampasuxballs lol i laughed.btw thats not a hint at me picking that one. Just i had a good laugh at it.

Btw, Piegod and I, we have the same voting magnitude.

zenzen213

Oct 21, 2012

zenzen213

Senior Member

Join Date: Jul 2012

Oct 21, 2012

Originally Posted by Beta

I judge Creativity more then the detail. The creativity in allllll the stories are tremendous, specially the one thats piegods password is betandhampasuxballs lol i laughed.btw thats not a hint at me picking that one. Just i had a good laugh at it.

Btw, Piegod and I, we have the same voting magnitude.

Well same thing as before.
I always put creativity in my stories.

mindless machine

Smiter

Oct 21, 2012

Smiter

SMITE ME OH MIGHTY SMITER

Join Date: Feb 2011

Oct 21, 2012

Prologue

Chapter 1

Chapter 2

Chapter 3

Chapter 4

Chapter 5

Chapter 6

Chapter 7

Chapter 8

Chapter 9

Chapter 10

Chapter 11

Chapter 12

Just updating it for you.
Can't do anymore for now.

Last edited by Smiter; Oct 21, 2012 at 08:43 AM.

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