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I might be one of the first to not shit talk here. I'll try to keep everything simple for now.

I see one big improvement on the graphical part, it looks much better than it was before. Not exactly good, though.
I see you /opt blood 0, you should also /opt bloodstains 0, so it does not appear on the ground. /opt bruises 0 so the toris touching won't get reddened. /opt trails 0, so you hide trails (the bruises and trails are completely optional, but most trails/bruises don't look good while filming).
About the Shader choice, I believe there are shader packs to download so you will have more options than the default ones (Most of them are not good looking due to being overused). Try to pick something that fits the song.
You need color correction, I highly recommend you downloading Magic Bullet Looks, it is a very good and simple tool to create a nice color correction. And again, always create a CC that fits the song.
The Sync, it was little, but there was some. Avoid cutting part of the replays to sync. Instead, crank the speed up on these cutted parts, it will sure look more smooth. I'm not exactly sure how it works on Sony Vegas, but I believe you could download Twixtor as an addon, it will do the job. About cutting the replay, when I was starting I also thought it would be best/easier to cut other than speed up, it may look good at first, but it's a terrible habit. (by then, it was also my second attempt).

for now, try to take these tips. I will keep an eye on you, it's good to see people get better. Avoid taking what pwr says seriously, he's known for shit talking ;o
Last edited by Rial; Aug 1, 2014 at 08:51 PM.
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this might be a bit offtopic, but it's something I want to help out.

Originally Posted by Habits View Post
It's at 3%, should be done uploading in the morning.

considering that, It looks like it takes a lot of time for you to upload your stuff. I used to make 30 seconds videos and they would still weight a lot.
I can't exactly explain you how to make low-weight HD videos because we use different softwares.
Look for a tutorial to render as MP4 with low-weight. It makes a HUGE difference. I am NOT exactly sure, but I believe this one will do the job.
(my videos used to weight about 1 GB, after I learned this technique, they would weight a max of 30 mb).
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Yeah, woof and I were talking about that too, my 30 second clip is about 2 GBs... His are like 30 MBs... Thanks for that link, Aku!
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well the video was kinda gross

but way better than my 2nd

kami you're one of the dumbest humans i've ever had the misfortune of listening to

this was my very first edit


this is a wip of my most recent video


No one is instantly god tier, it takes practice and determination to become good

telling someone their SECOND edit is gross and they should quit isn't going to help them

/Ontopic

Sync was pretty okay

cc and shader were gross

Freecam was surprisingly okay

slow motion was pretty laggy, either record it at .25 replay speed and speed it up, or use twixtor which masks low fps clips pretty well

I'd find a crack for mbl, it has endless possibilities for color correction.

all in all, not too shabby for a second
Originally Posted by Rumour View Post

I hope to see more from you, we always need more striving artists.


i didn't make those videos WTF

the only i did were these







video

WE. GO. JIM.
he wasn't talking to you dumbshit

he was simply quoting that arrogant comment you made about giving up if you're not instantly godtier