HTOTM: FUSION
Originally Posted by Accused View Post
@haze - unseen~ This replay is quite good but you can find some twitches for example 443 your left hip and glute just twitches the hits were nice and powerful neat stuff but many of the grabs were just unnecessary the ending skeet was nice.

@lolwat~I liked this replay but not really a fan of that opener otherwise you turned it into something nice and that's the part I liked most about that replay 364-312 you had enough momentum and power to create a nice neat boom hit but you did a split i'm not against it looks still nice decap was ok I agree with Daxula you could have done a pose or just pull it off and do more with the upper part of uke.

thanks~<3

i'll try and make something good next time
Wowoowowowow how could you say that to me, sorry i haven't been on your thread in a bit (actually the replay thread in general). So anyways here we go
Who: This replay in my opinion was quite simple (but sweet) the flow was noice, but floppy ass wrists, and the DMs were simple. The pose was nice though, I loved the way you eased into it.

Disembodied Asian Children: This replay didn't have as much flow, but regardless it was nice replay. The beginning launch was really nice, afterwards the chest DM hit wasn't the best, but it wasn't that bad. When you were moving the torso for the boom, that one kick you did to the bottom of the chest joint was REALLY out of place, it looked really awkward and a bit twitchy. The last transition to the kick was decent, but the kick itself was gr8 m8. Transition to pose was pretty bad you twitched in midair and once you landed too, but overall great replay.. Hope you win the competition
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I say nice WAYY too much
Last edited by Orbus; Oct 9, 2014 at 04:02 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
Shaken Baby Syndrome
You smell like shit
Row: You were doing great until the second cork came around, the way you executed it look awkward, and the landing wasn't that bad. The transition to pose wasn't all that great, and the pose itself was pretty normal. But who the fuck cares about poses...

Swing of the cock: Rush kick opener 4 lyfe, the way you pushed uke looked pretty damn good for some reason, where as the launch wasn't as great. That 360 head choke was kool. The pose was a pose... 21/9+10