Deep sea - It wasn't terrible, but not much happened in it either. The first jump held lots of potential, and the tiny leg flick was pretty okay for some reason. The moves afterwards seemed a little uneventful, as if lacking flair. The use of your arm to do the move doesn't seem too good also, it could be waaay better.
Blueberry pie - Hm, that opener wasn't too good looking. That kick you did on the ground did manage to put you in the air for like, a millimeter, but it looked bad. The speed gain was cool, and the kick wasn't bad either. But the manip. Dang, you shouldn't bang your head to uke like that. Looks rather unclean and messy. The spin punch and kick weren't bad. Quite good average actually. The skeet was okay, not exactly my kind of skeet though.
Lots of room for improvement, but you seem like you could do better replays. You seem rather floaty most of the time in your replays though, you might want to do something about that.
Last edited by Spry; Dec 28, 2014 at 04:54 PM.