HTOTM: FUSION
8/10 if you could make it a little bit longer and not wait the last 200 frames it would be better c:
master nubclapr
Originally Posted by Bozo134 View Post
8/10 if you could make it a little bit longer and not wait the last 200 frames it would be better c:

As i said, i am not finished yet. please read the whole post before commenting on it.
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Mack - Maguu speed.rpl (230.4 KB, 36 views)
parkour_parallel_maguu.tbm (6.6 KB, 17 views)
Last edited by Mack; Dec 24, 2014 at 02:25 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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Bump, the replay above didnt bump the thread up because it thought i edited it in, this one is about 4 hours old by now, with other words. I'm still accepting CnC from it.
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Thx killer, gonna start working on a new one soon. Get hyped
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Damn, mack. That is some sick shit you got there. Your run was really nice, your jumps were well placed. I can't say more, but you could have taken a longer route.

Anyway, bravo ol' chap. Keep it up
Heart of Gold
Originally Posted by B4CKST4B View Post
Damn, mack. That is some sick shit you got there. Your run was really nice, your jumps were well placed. I can't say more, but you could have taken a longer route.

Anyway, bravo ol' chap. Keep it up

Thank you b4ck, next replay should be up tommorow or the day after, idk
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Alwight, i came up with this short tricking replay after about 2 hours of tryharding. I'm not very happy with the last kick but i had a hard time to improve it.
I am also taking a break after this, I'm off to the mountains skiing and celebrating new year.
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Allright, Last replay for the year. I'm finally finished with Blueberry pie , It was a pain in the ass.
Attached Files
Mack - Deep sea.rpl (124.0 KB, 36 views)
Mack - Blueberry Pie.rpl (229.6 KB, 27 views)
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Deep sea - It wasn't terrible, but not much happened in it either. The first jump held lots of potential, and the tiny leg flick was pretty okay for some reason. The moves afterwards seemed a little uneventful, as if lacking flair. The use of your arm to do the move doesn't seem too good also, it could be waaay better.

Blueberry pie - Hm, that opener wasn't too good looking. That kick you did on the ground did manage to put you in the air for like, a millimeter, but it looked bad. The speed gain was cool, and the kick wasn't bad either. But the manip. Dang, you shouldn't bang your head to uke like that. Looks rather unclean and messy. The spin punch and kick weren't bad. Quite good average actually. The skeet was okay, not exactly my kind of skeet though.

Lots of room for improvement, but you seem like you could do better replays. You seem rather floaty most of the time in your replays though, you might want to do something about that.
Last edited by Spry; Dec 28, 2014 at 04:54 PM.
Thank you for the constructive CnC spry, i will keep this in mind as soon as i get back.
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