The white part looks a little bit pixeled/unsmooth. Could you fix it?

Ofc see you on next wip :3
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Done?

This part is weird:


I can't clearly see the flame.
The eye is wrong! Look at this:

There is no white in there. Fix it. /dl and /lp my tori for more details!

Also this shit looks fat:

Make it thinner.

Better now?

There is a white and skin color around here
Itu garis garis item yang didalam matanya kalo gak pas jangan dipaksain kaya yang ini: Yang kiri terlalu maksa.


Coba buat flamenya, lu gambar sesuai yang ada digambar Azion.
Abis itu Opacitynya lu kecilin, bagusan gitu daripada bikin pake brush atau apapun itu. Flamenya jadi keliatan gajelas.

Oke bang mgnkin bsok w selesein
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Like this?

I still want you to fix something. PM'd.

What a shit wa

Mungkin yang dimaksud raiken,
Flame nya kaya yang lo bikin pertama, flamenya didepan tangan, bukan belakang

Dua lapis kok, warna aslinya kan item ungu. Dilapis aja, Yang ungu dibelakang cuma digedein lagi, terus yang item didepan terus diselimutin yang ungu.