^What Cerberus said.
Furthmore, it looks like a sketch at all. Half done heads.
Fuss mapping, not really good. Too blur, too dirty. Your group's motto says: "LETS BRING THE GOOD ART BACK TO TB." uh, man... Too loud, seriously. Maybe if you will practice a lot you will make something good after all but now, honestly, you are quite far from high quality.
Sum it up: make your art neatly, work on your palette, read the guides how to make a good mapping, how to draw an anatomy and after one or two years of practice you will become someone worth. You would laugh on what you are making and saying nowadays.
Cheers.
Furthmore, it looks like a sketch at all. Half done heads.
Fuss mapping, not really good. Too blur, too dirty. Your group's motto says: "LETS BRING THE GOOD ART BACK TO TB." uh, man... Too loud, seriously. Maybe if you will practice a lot you will make something good after all but now, honestly, you are quite far from high quality.
Sum it up: make your art neatly, work on your palette, read the guides how to make a good mapping, how to draw an anatomy and after one or two years of practice you will become someone worth. You would laugh on what you are making and saying nowadays.
Cheers.
Originally Posted by Hug
^What Cerberus said.
Furthmore, it looks like a sketch at all. Half done heads.
Fuss mapping, not really good. Too blur, too dirty. Your group's motto says: "LETS BRING THE GOOD ART BACK TO TB." uh, man... Too loud, seriously. Maybe if you will practice a lot you will make something good after all but now, honestly, you are quite far from high quality.
Sum it up: make your art neatly, work on your palette, read the guides how to make a good mapping, how to draw an anatomy and after one or two years of practice you will become someone worth. You would laugh on what you are making and saying nowadays.
Cheers.
This is good advice, for some reason its aggressive and a little mean tho ._.
I'm just trying to help
I know IM fucking shit, I said that on the first slide
I said that it was just for fun, not too serious, idk man
this type of CNC is kinda annoying for some reason
Not everyone can be the best. Just tell me what to change, don't be like "not really good" I don't need to here shit like that, just tell me what to do different
My group motto is because I can so don't give me "uh, man... Too loud, seriously" shit
constructive criticism
sir
I didn't even say something about the best etc. I did not use words like "shit" whic you really love to use, swag keed.
"I made it for fun so no bad cnc pl0x" for some reason I'm making that comment for fun too and "for fun" is not the reason to abandon that.
"I wrote motto like that cuz I can" so I'm telling you my opinion about that cuz I can too, mkay?
Your self-esteem is too big that won't let you see clearly what I wrote.
I told you already: "make your art neatly, work on your palette, read the guides how to make a good mapping, how to draw an anatomy". Should I delve? Okay, let's do this.
1. Make your art neatly: you have too much lines which are not even something like lineart, more like primary sketch when you are deciding which form your object will have lately. Too many monochrome lines which are making whole art "dirty".
There is no point to do such many different contrast lines.
Another point: don't you know about the light source? For example on that head. You have srong light on the beak and on the ears/horns(?) and at the same point you have light from the down on his random squama pieces. How is that even possible? Make ONE light source, read what is reflective light etc. Also, just read about the lighting at all if you never heard about that.
Texture. If he has a hair (I think he has because of his fabulous scrunchy) - then you should emphasize it by drawing the separated lighter filaments.
Why do he have strong light borders on the root of the beak? If it is not a sticky artificial nose the they're shouldn't be there.
I will say nothing about his squama just because everything in it is bad.
"Hornears" are made of thick ice or glass? I suppose you did not mean to do that, same about the solid black line on the corner - what is that supposed to be? Shadow or a black hole born? There shouldn't be that thing.
2. Work on your palette means that you know nothing about the colors. At the first steps just copy paste your palette from any porfessional artists or just use that http://paletton.com/#uid=1000u0kllllaFw0g0qFqFg0w0aF.
3. Mapping. Look at the top of your Crow head. Don't you see that your line is broken or that your scrunchy halves are making a perfect angle? nblx made a mapping tutorial just search it on the forum or just catch it by yourself.
4. Anatomy? Simple answer: just read the anatomy basics or you will always draw that zombies with the Jackson's nose, big wide eyes and high set ears.
Why do you even ask about the criticism if you are making a child art? If you are not ready to hear cncs like that - you've chosen the wrong place to post your pics.
Trust me, I've made a pretty loyal comment. When I've started to make a textures at the old ru-tori forum I've got many comments with the abusive word but my reaction wasn't like "Kewl swaggy keed mod: on" I've just started to evolve my art skills and just came to the point when they started to appreciate my stuff. Seriously, with the mood like that you will never ever make something really good.
Cheers!
P.S
I hope there is not too many words and you will read it all because you've asked for that.
Homie, too much s*** words for the schoolboy as you are. I'm not trying to insult you. You've said that your are a schoolboy. Just seriously... Is that approvingly behavior in your country? Are you using abusive words at your home with your parents? You are just showing off, m8.
"I made it for fun so no bad cnc pl0x" for some reason I'm making that comment for fun too and "for fun" is not the reason to abandon that.
"I wrote motto like that cuz I can" so I'm telling you my opinion about that cuz I can too, mkay?
Your self-esteem is too big that won't let you see clearly what I wrote.
I told you already: "make your art neatly, work on your palette, read the guides how to make a good mapping, how to draw an anatomy". Should I delve? Okay, let's do this.
1. Make your art neatly: you have too much lines which are not even something like lineart, more like primary sketch when you are deciding which form your object will have lately. Too many monochrome lines which are making whole art "dirty".
There is no point to do such many different contrast lines.
Another point: don't you know about the light source? For example on that head. You have srong light on the beak and on the ears/horns(?) and at the same point you have light from the down on his random squama pieces. How is that even possible? Make ONE light source, read what is reflective light etc. Also, just read about the lighting at all if you never heard about that.
Texture. If he has a hair (I think he has because of his fabulous scrunchy) - then you should emphasize it by drawing the separated lighter filaments.
Why do he have strong light borders on the root of the beak? If it is not a sticky artificial nose the they're shouldn't be there.
I will say nothing about his squama just because everything in it is bad.
"Hornears" are made of thick ice or glass? I suppose you did not mean to do that, same about the solid black line on the corner - what is that supposed to be? Shadow or a black hole born? There shouldn't be that thing.
2. Work on your palette means that you know nothing about the colors. At the first steps just copy paste your palette from any porfessional artists or just use that http://paletton.com/#uid=1000u0kllllaFw0g0qFqFg0w0aF.
3. Mapping. Look at the top of your Crow head. Don't you see that your line is broken or that your scrunchy halves are making a perfect angle? nblx made a mapping tutorial just search it on the forum or just catch it by yourself.
4. Anatomy? Simple answer: just read the anatomy basics or you will always draw that zombies with the Jackson's nose, big wide eyes and high set ears.
Why do you even ask about the criticism if you are making a child art? If you are not ready to hear cncs like that - you've chosen the wrong place to post your pics.
Trust me, I've made a pretty loyal comment. When I've started to make a textures at the old ru-tori forum I've got many comments with the abusive word but my reaction wasn't like "Kewl swaggy keed mod: on" I've just started to evolve my art skills and just came to the point when they started to appreciate my stuff. Seriously, with the mood like that you will never ever make something really good.
Cheers!
P.S
I hope there is not too many words and you will read it all because you've asked for that.
Homie, too much s*** words for the schoolboy as you are. I'm not trying to insult you. You've said that your are a schoolboy. Just seriously... Is that approvingly behavior in your country? Are you using abusive words at your home with your parents? You are just showing off, m8.
