well....cloren,you really needed to relax more and try to control all the body parts.I'm saying that you should move many body parts at the same time.control more joints,and never grab for too much time.And try to speed up your dismemberments.you might then have better results.and on top of all,you need to gain momentum(speed).Cuz if your movements weren't fast,not many DMs will take place.You can edit your replay in the parts that you want to improve.Take your time,and try to improve as much as you can.
