Love the kitty halue. But I wish it looked more... finished? With the supplies you listed, you could have refined it wayyyyy more. The one thing that stood out to me were the eyes and ears. The inside of the ears look like they were just cross-hatched and that's it. The eyes have the pupil stand out way too much. Ofc, making the pupil stand out could be an artistic choice, but the way it looks kinda looked like "i need to make the pupil, so let's make it darker." It also looks like a box... curve the right and left sides a wee bit more and the shape is PERF. You can also smooth out graphite by using a cottonswab and rubbing it against the area that was drawn on. Play around with that, I find it fun and relaxing. I'm kinda in a hangover now so any typos are just there. Yeah