The first one is good Arthur. Relaxing.

What the fuck happened with second one though? Not repetitive enough. Needs a rhythm, and repeated. Something that sticks from the first 10 seconds, and is the star of the show for the rest of the song. Also fuck the alien white noise and ur drums.

EDIT: I'm 1:21 into the song and I just burst out laughing xDDD wtffff xDDD the tuba scared the shit out of me.

Fine tune it. I see where you're trying to go, but the execution isn't pretty. From 2:08 it gets better though. Still...idk.

Ik you're just messing around lel. If I were to rate, 5.5/10?

this got me dying https://soundcloud.com/freakingaweso...i-shop-channel

xD

I promised myself I wouldn't like/get hooked on this.

I failed

It's fucking terrible, but so addictive. Cocaine.

this great tho

Lets go for something more christmassy this time.

Yo, I made a thing.
https://soundcloud.com/notsupposedto...hat-i-imagined

Now that I listen to it, I feel like the synth at 0:53 is a bit too loud. What do you think?

I'm no music expert but I can say I do enjoy it. Nice work, thanks for sharing


Edit: No, I don't think it's too loud

Yeah, It could be a bit quieter. It doesn't blend in very well in a mix. Also did you try to make it stand out in the first place?
I think if you made it sound like a grand piano or smth, It would sound a lot more natural.