#1 thing i tell people when i cnc tricking replays: dont be afraid of relaxing joints. i know that at some point you probably did that, but i mean for an extended amount of time.
your entire lower half just twitched like a mofo at the beginning of the replay. the idea is to swing your body one way by moving the entire body in one direction, and forcing your body to turn when you counter the spin; not to spazz into position. dramatize your movements more.
the toe-jump was just weird, but ok. something that i notice in a lot of trickers is that they tend not to relax their elbows. sometimes it's good; sometimes it looks bad. try and find out where its good and bad.
fast transition into the next trick. i like it. relax your chest more though. when landing, extending your elbows looks weird. relax them instead. simple pose.
gj