after the awp shot the awp being frozen in place looks terrible, looks like you took a screenshot, added a filter and keyframed it to rock side to side.
transition from shot to CT body flopping is nice, but you showed the body for too long, maybe having it fly around the head would add a touch to it.
other transition from CT body to T first person looks cool i guess.
concept is cool, but if you dont add the stuff that edits like that usually add its gonna look kinda bad, good job nonetheless dont listen to me anyways i cant edit