Hello.
Apologies for my invasion, but I'd like to give some CnC.
(I asked Karbn if I could post here, apparently, I can.)
Lionet:
Alright, pretty basic opener.
The initial Uke lift is meh, could've been faster.
The second lift wasn't too great, seemed like you were out of ideas.
Manip is fairly short.
Decap was cool, I like the precision.
The second hit was forced and boring.
The third hit was sloppy.
The last hit was really cool.
That pose, I dig it.
If you kept the leg on your back or something I would've loved that pose.
tl;dr: fairly mediocre replay, work on your execution and ideas more, fantastic pose.
6/10
Haluejah:
Basic opener.
Movement out of opener is nice.
Twitchy turn.
The first hit is ok.
Hacked chest dm.
Second hit's flow is nice.
Hacked pec and shoulder dm.
Basic and boring transition.
Obvious grab.
The third hit is ok, hack abs and stomach dm.
Transition to pose and the pose are pretty bad imo.
tl;dr: you have a good style, work on more exotic things. Also, stop hacking dms.
5/10