vote is no.. sorry... I guess this is a general No.
Next time Read the "good application" example I made on the first page and use it for get some inspiration in what ur writing.
I didnt feel the pathos at all.. + if you could see the others ppls who applied u will realize we dont like ppls to keep asking if they are accepted by spamming on this thread.
application is one... u just used ur shot in a really bad way