Looks like your getting used to -30. Opener looked like it had some momentum. The moment you raised your arm and extended legs you lost your momentum. You could've swept through them motion do a spin and do a nice smooth boom. Dm's were okay. Last kick almost made me go wow but it didn't. I would be amazed if you could make the kick look less stiff and had more dm's in it. Keep practicing. 8.5/10