Toribash
what!!!!!: not very good. There were a bunch of twitchy movements, not very good dms. I suggest you try stiffening up a little. It will help you learn basic movements.

Edit: sorry i couldnt do much. The grab wasn't exactly easy to work with.
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Tazuko edit.rpl (59.9 KB, 7 views)
I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals
That grab is awkward so you can't really do much with it. Here's a WIP. I can't find a good way to get up after the kick and still make uke have an orgasm.
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KenGee- Adrenaline Rush.rpl (178.9 KB, 6 views)
Ken, is mister not very replay active or do you just miss us
I am fond of pigs. Dogs look up to us. Cats look down on us. Pigs treat us as equals
Hm. It's a bit stiff. I'm pretty sure your new to -30 gravity so just do some parkour or trick replays and you'll get used to it. Well here's a opener contest entry for my clan event. It's a -9.82 replay and the opener sucks :| lots C&C appreciated.
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Opener Contest #1.rpl (241.5 KB, 8 views)
Even though it is a -9.82 replay, you made it look like a -30 gravitied replay, Good job on that. The replay is all multi-DM's no booms. Could have been better if you hit more but your position didn't allow you to do that. The skeet seems over-laxed but looks good and well aimed.
8.5/10



Another -30 replay:
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cham- omega.rpl (237.8 KB, 14 views)
Looks like your getting used to -30. Opener looked like it had some momentum. The moment you raised your arm and extended legs you lost your momentum. You could've swept through them motion do a spin and do a nice smooth boom. Dm's were okay. Last kick almost made me go wow but it didn't. I would be amazed if you could make the kick look less stiff and had more dm's in it. Keep practicing. 8.5/10
I can't fix that last kick, maybe I can make it more relaxed but I can't get a boom. And can you fix the opener for me?