Toribash
I enjoyed that one. Good opener. Nice punching and I like the decap. Using the ground is very creative.

It's good that you're getting better and better. Keep it up!
★★★★★
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And another thing.
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[19:39] <Birdflu> I'm just sad that I can't give myself one
[19:39] <Birdflu> I'd have a great time
Pretty neat but lacked a certain flow and flair in my opinion - you've made better but this is still above average. Keep on working on it mate, you're getting there.
That replay is pretty nice. But there are some little things that are a little out of place. For example your first kick. You spin, so your foot goes downwards, yet you kick upwards. This kills the flow a little and reduces the potential power. I feel you should have executed the kick earlier.
The second kick looked a little too close to your body.
Those are minor things, I'm not trying to be picky, but since the major stuff is alright, this is what could have been improved in my oppinion.
Thanks for the Avatar, MrAakash
The snap kick was a little bit too "snappy." When used right, it looks good. You didn't use it right. xD The grab was kind of useless, as there wasn't a boom. The kick ~290 could've been a great boom. I think you should've edited that a bit more, if at all.

I have no idea what Tamer0 and Meamme0 are talking about. I thought it had adequate flow. It's just lacking a bit in the destruction department.

Everything excluded in my critique was great. I just don't feel like typing to boost your ego. :I
Originally Posted by ChuiGum View Post
The kick ~290 could've been a great boom. I think you should've edited that a bit more, if at all.

I spent a huge amount of time trying to get that to boom, believe me. Keeping it grabbed actually meant there were no DM's at all, so I let go a few frames before and was rewarded with a single DM. Go ahead and try to get a boom if you really want to try.
[19:39] <Birdflu> I'm just sad that I can't give myself one
[19:39] <Birdflu> I'd have a great time
Hm. You're right. That's a real pain in the ass. I still think a boom is doable though fucking impossible. I got one more DM for you. I'll continue editing, and try to get a boom. Fuck that. It's too damn hard.
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Last edited by ChuiGum; Mar 11, 2010 at 06:57 AM.
Back to usual stuff.
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[19:39] <Birdflu> I'm just sad that I can't give myself one
[19:39] <Birdflu> I'd have a great time
Starts off slow, but then you kick ass, and that's always fun. I felt that the kick at the core should've accomplished something, and was sadface when it didn't. Good though :3
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