Hmm, let's take a look:
GOOD
Nice belt!
Aikido is awesome.
Great loyalty swear! ^_^
NEEDS IMPROVEMENT
Fix the last part of "How will you benifit the clan?"
You need to work on your grammer (spelling to get specific) a you misspelled some words in your application, but don't worry, we arnt grammer freaks :3
BAD
You have to be active on forums more, you only have 42 posts so your activity can't be that high, inactivity is frowned upon here.
I say your in, you look like a great member to have
congrats! Your rank is Private First Class, here's your tag [MFR-PFC] :> post what kind of tactic you want please.
Last edited by CRASH3R; May 14, 2010 at 09:13 AM.