Okay, here's exactly why I don't like this clan.
Firstly, I think there are way too many official clans already, and I certainly don't want more unless they are excellent. A lot of the clans that are already (and have recently become) official are controversial. I think many clans are sloppy and totally undeserving of becoming official, and the current system is very flawed - although I don't see it changing any time soon.
More about this clan in particular: The first thing I pick at in my mind is the name, "Bloody Nightmare". This is more personal opinion but to me it just sounds a bit naf, but I guess a good clan can still do well without an uberly epic name. Next is the thread itself and the organisation. It doesn't seem to have much in, basically the bare minimum it must have in. The story is kinda crap and not well thought out, and also doesn't make much sense. The clan pic is plagiarised, and IMO having no relation whatsoever to the clan. Also the clan aim is cliche (I can't do an acute accent for some reason...), and not really a good reason to make a clan.
The actual members make me dislike the clan too. The leader has poor spelling and grammar, seems to double post a lot and not post really meaningful posts. The other members I don't know, but I can pretty much tell from their names that they are similar. I can't help but notice how low most of the belts are too. I know belt doesn't really mean that much, but it helps to have a clan with member that have at least some experience.
It seems to me that this clan was made for the sake of making a clan, and to get a server.
I think that's pretty much everything. It's not fully explained but you get the picture. I think the main reason to sum it up is: There are too many clans, and I don't want new ones that don't fill the shadow of the old ones.
Although you are inevitably going to get official, I just wanted to say how I feel about it, instead of flaming the thread with no explanation.
Gawd I'm gonna have to proof read all of this now...
Firstly, I think there are way too many official clans already, and I certainly don't want more unless they are excellent. A lot of the clans that are already (and have recently become) official are controversial. I think many clans are sloppy and totally undeserving of becoming official, and the current system is very flawed - although I don't see it changing any time soon.
More about this clan in particular: The first thing I pick at in my mind is the name, "Bloody Nightmare". This is more personal opinion but to me it just sounds a bit naf, but I guess a good clan can still do well without an uberly epic name. Next is the thread itself and the organisation. It doesn't seem to have much in, basically the bare minimum it must have in. The story is kinda crap and not well thought out, and also doesn't make much sense. The clan pic is plagiarised, and IMO having no relation whatsoever to the clan. Also the clan aim is cliche (I can't do an acute accent for some reason...), and not really a good reason to make a clan.
The actual members make me dislike the clan too. The leader has poor spelling and grammar, seems to double post a lot and not post really meaningful posts. The other members I don't know, but I can pretty much tell from their names that they are similar. I can't help but notice how low most of the belts are too. I know belt doesn't really mean that much, but it helps to have a clan with member that have at least some experience.
It seems to me that this clan was made for the sake of making a clan, and to get a server.
I think that's pretty much everything. It's not fully explained but you get the picture. I think the main reason to sum it up is: There are too many clans, and I don't want new ones that don't fill the shadow of the old ones.
Although you are inevitably going to get official, I just wanted to say how I feel about it, instead of flaming the thread with no explanation.
Gawd I'm gonna have to proof read all of this now...
work it harder make it better do it faster makes us stronger more than ever hour after our work is never over
Totally Agree with A0XR, I have something to add though..
After looking back and forth to my story and yours, theres not MUCH difference except.. It's totally bad grammar and spelling and yaaadda yadda.
Not meaning to flame, just Constructive Criticism. Like, Change the story and find someone to make a pic?
After looking back and forth to my story and yours, theres not MUCH difference except.. It's totally bad grammar and spelling and yaaadda yadda.
Not meaning to flame, just Constructive Criticism. Like, Change the story and find someone to make a pic?
Originally Posted by pawned
Hmm.. his story looks very similar to the story we had when we was called [Vampire].
That might be something to do with fact that this clan used to be called "vampire forse"...
work it harder make it better do it faster makes us stronger more than ever hour after our work is never over