Toribash
Originally Posted by MrJingles1 View Post
First step could use a little work.

The manip hits were okay, but it's really hard to manip in -30 as you know. The transition to the kick was nice.

The glute punch was unexpected, though something about it looked off. I think it would be better if you grabbed him with that hand after and kicked with the other leg.

Transition to the next kick was relatively fast, but you could make a bigger boom or something nice.

Skeet was slow, but the pose was cool.

Try working on your movements, they weren't bad, but you can do better ;o

Also I laughed so hard at the name.

Thanks for your CnC.

Originally Posted by pusga View Post
First step was akward
The semi manip was okay, and so was the kick, it had a nice transition
The glute punch looked a bit strange, and I think that the next kick had a great setup but you didn't use it very well
The head skeet was alright, pretty close range

I worked alot at that kick but I couldn't turn it to a boom. :/

Well, anyways, here is another madman.
Made this pretty quickly.

EDIT: Fixed the landing and pose.
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Last edited by chamara; Oct 22, 2012 at 04:18 PM.
Ewwwww!
Come on Chammy, you can do much better then that...

The starter was stiff and slow and you contracted the wrists to get all the dms.
You probably wanna redo that gainer thingy, it kinda stopped in midair.
The DMs were fast. They looked pretty messy though. The gainer you did was pretty stiff but the posing was great.
Last edited by Spry; Oct 24, 2012 at 02:37 PM.
well, opener was slow and stiff, and it's for run i guess
Your hit was alright, actually i like the last hit.
The pose was unique, looked great.
"People become stronger cause there are memories they won't forget."
The landing was a bit better, and so was the pose, but IMO the replay was already broken after the hits (not trying to be offensive)
oh yeah
Wow, this board got way too active...
I left my thread for 1 week and it just came down to the 3rd page.

Anyways, quick shitty replay full of shitty shittiness.
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The first two kicks were fast, they're quite good really, though it would've been better if you just left it like that if you're making a quick replay.
That opener is becoming repetitive, besides being an already boring one IMO.
The double kick was stylish, but you kicking the ground with both legs at the same time to get momentum for the punch did not look so stylish. The punch was regular, nothing too impressive.
oh yeah