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Opener was pretty sweet man liked it.

You should have used your arm to push uke towards you though. The kick itself was not very good to be honest, you should go for a boom and use the foot. Your kick used more of the shin.

rest was alright, I liked the decap it was nice but might look better if you didn't grab and just kicked once you landed after that flip.

Your movement was a little jerky here and there so work on that.

pose was good though.
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Thank goodness for you juck, that replay was great. The tricking Was ok but not something I would gasp at(except for the cork). the BoomShot was powerful and was cool. the only thing I can say is try not to have your arm up the whole time while you were corking.
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Alright thanks for the feedback guys. As of now I have two new replays.
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Hey Juckewhat do you think of a collab replay with me
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Shut up luke, it doesn't matter if it's basic, I'd still say he's better then you.

Swift11 - your opener was nice and the kick was really well-thought out.
The only thing is that you took too long to get to the pose and you ghosted your arm into your leg momentarily.
You9 - Very nice replay, you've improved a lot since I last watched one of your replays.
The opener was cool, looked slightly like largekilla's style.
The punch and the way you put you used your grab to get momentum during the transition was nice.
The split was pretty solid, but I feel as if you could've gotten 2 dms there. The random hip dm was funny.
The chest kicks were nice, but it would've been better had the last one been a boom and not a decap.

Sorry about taking so long, I got grounded, but I can see that you're improving greatly.
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Hey jucke just something quick do you see that replay Clean cut on my replay thread? just hop in and edit it whenev
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