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With Enter Thou octagon it seems very realistic, yet a unique fighting style. Though i wish you would work on the pose at the end, where it seems he was a drunken fighter and tried to stand up, but he kinda just... Flopped...
Wow.. Thanks guys. I really didn't expect that :o
I made a fresh parkour for an event. Cnc pls
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Last edited by Hattersin; Dec 16, 2013 at 09:48 PM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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Looks awesome
that slide made me so happy

Opener was ok it twitched a little bit but nothing too major
the punching thing looks super cool dude

Around 677 you could have extended your leg to spin him idk why you didn't
at 658 you kinda borked the manip because you put force on uke in a way so it broke the spin, then you started continuing it which looked pretty cool

boom was cool but it seemed like you could have skeet-capped him before the pose
and the pose was awesome
Opener was eh, boring.
First couple hits were awesome, super sweg.
Slide was pretty cool, but broke your fl0w dood.
After that was alright, hits were rather weak for my taste. Boom was pretty sexy.
Also, probably couldn't have skeet-capped without ruining flow since you would either have to go super fast or waited for him uke's torso to turn around again, and both are pretty eh choices.
Pose was sweg.
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Opener was pretty in my opinion.

sweet manip hits and wonderful slide.

leg push wasn't the best, should've extended and relaxed or something.

transition from there was rather iffy, but still good.

and nice kick to finish things off.


cool replay dood! Just work on movement and transitions and you're all set
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i like the opener, kicks and punches looks nice
slide itself was awesome but all your speed completely dissapeared after it

kick looked nice

so yeah your movement is supercool, you just need to keep the flow of it
transition to the pose was great, and so was the pose
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Hey dude said I was gonna cnc yesterday but I told you what happened.

anyways the opener has been done before quite a bit but its ok because the lift you got from it was great I loved the way you majestically flew in the air at 715 but then you ruined it with really quick movement for balance :C
I understand it was needed but maybe you could have smoothened it out.

The launch was great got you a cool double butt hit
and then you did the shoulder thing :DD
I didn't really enjoy the grab after that but that's because I was looking forward to like a double punch combo.
the decap was alright but the boom is what made up for the grab

Great replay overall glad you took my suggestions in making this
i like the opener and the lift you got on uke looks supercool
when you start to run you loose control and become forced to ruin your flow to regain control and balance
i would've tried fixing that step to be more controllable etc

i like the launch and butt dm's, shame you didn't get that groins
god i love groin dms

i really like your flow from the first arm dm until the grab to boom the torso
but the grab itself sort of ruined the nice flow you had going on there imo

i like the pose, you look a bit gay and i like it
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