Rude ass motherfuckers. There are nicer ways of wording what they had said, so here it goes:
"Glitchy"
Basically, they mean at the parts where the song repeats a word, and you hop it back. That doesn't exactly look the best, maybe instead of hopping it back in an instant fashion, it could slow down, speed up, slow down, speed up, or something like that?
"Choppy"
They mean either "Glitchy" or the FPS drops occasionally. A few times the FPS seemed to lower, just enough to be slightly noticed. It isn't to huge of a problem, but is worth taking into consideration.
"Cheesecakey"
I've got no fucking idea. Maybe they mean it's unoriginal, or something like that? This one didn't make sense too me either Mocucha, and I do know that English isn't your first language, so some of these stupid fucking words might not make entire sense.
My personal CNC would be too relax on the hopping back and forth. Not saying entirely remove it, but try and make it a little bit smoother. The overlay isn't exactly the best, grade A overlay, but it's definitely not as bad as people say. Maybe reduce the brightness, opacity, etc. Being honest, this isn't your best work. But that's why it is a wip, after all. I do think this will work out.
Also, you have subscribers because you have tutorial videos, and do edits for people. It's that simple TyZi.
Hope this helped man, I really appreciate all the work you do, and am not exactly pleased with the way people are treating you over an edit that just isn't your best.
People It is a wip! The final product will look better if you just support and give him some ideas or help. A wip doesn't really look good but the complete one will. That is what I'm saying.
does this imply you disregard criticism? cause it sure as hell seems like it
alright so a basic understanding of what criticism means involves knowing that it shouldn't matter who it's coming from, which you don't seem to get and keep enforcing the opposite in a quite hostile and direct manner, for whatever reason
it doesn't prove anyone's points wrong nor does it serve as a somewhat okay argument
you clearly know a lot about editing too
i mean who doesn't know piling up effects makes a video good duhh
oh you sure told him!
disregarding advice is the best way to improve after all
he obviously hasn't changed anything from the first wip regardless of all the things people pointed out, why is everyone who is "defending" him acting like nothing was said in the first place
makes me wonder if this dick-riding hostile fanbase of his even understands the posts they flamed and ridiculed with all their hearts
imo everything from the tricking part was really cool, you should've stuck to that kinda style from the beginning
I tinks its time to retire mocu
Or listen to the masses and improve because it's the same quality of videos over and over (tbh goin downhill)
:/
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Putting this out there, because some cunt is going to point Mocucha out on his spelling:
English isn't his native language, therefore you shouldn't be a prick.
So this doesn't get removed for "Useless Posting" I am going to make another point about the video:
The transitions between replays are extremely bright, regarding your opinion, it might look better with a little less brightness too it? Other than that, this video falls together neatly. Looking forward to the finished video. I am sincerely sorry on behalf of the assholes who don't know how to put a correct post about criticism.
lil' banter here
most people on this thread don't have English as their native language, and no one said anything about mocucha's spelling
So this doesn't get removed for "Useless Posting" I am going to make another point about the video:
The transitions between replays are extremely bright, regarding your opinion, it might look better with a little less brightness too it? Other than that, this video falls together neatly. Looking forward to the finished video
also, for mocucha that video was, i can't even describe it in words. i'm not being mean to you, but those 'lensflares' were annoying as fuck, and not a good choice of song. also, this is all rigged gg no re wp
Mocu, the spar is too long without any effect, maybe you can do hmmm... you know? That effect.
the repeats/jumpcuts:
the jumpcuts were fine imo
the repeats at 0:22-0:24 were a bit different from the rest of them, since these didn't actually end with whatever came next in the replay. its like you combined a jumpcut with the last repeat. makes me think that there might've been more to that replay.
the repeats overall are awful imo. i mean yeah, the song repeats itself, but that doesnt mean you have to do it every time it has those repeating sessions. like you didn't do the jumpcuts in the beginning repeatedly did you? those were more tolerable because they werent done over and over in the video.
instead of repeating the clip over and over again when the song starts repeating itself, do the speed up and slow down thing like skypepro said. just not too much to where it's annoying.
or maybe you can sync some of the hits with the repeats. that'd be smoother.
you dont have to do it on every repeated word. maybe wait a word, then do whatever effect you want to do, wait a word, etc
also: at 1:13 those repeats looked better than all the rest. just pointing that out
the overlays:
i think the overlays for the most part were fine. the overlay at 1:01-1:26 is questionable however
the glow around the toris didn't really fit in yeah?
other effects
the toris lose quality when they start lighting up at 0:41-0:58
dont you think you couldve just left the replay at normal speed, (0:56), since it is short anyways?
the thing at 1:20 was cool. maybe when that effect is over, perhaps shake the tori left to right a bit to have the illusion that they united back?
in all honesty, you should really focus on the replays themselves, without ruining their flow. if the majority of the video is trying to show how cool the effects are instead of how cool the replays are then what's the point?
this song is rather hard to work with, so good luck.
i'd suggest starting from scratch tho buddy :c
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