some of the dms were kinda sloppy and the random toe grabs were kinda weird, though they are interesting
the initial dm sequence had a rocky start but got better, I think you could do it a bit cleaner if you managed to ghost some of those hits
I liked the way you used the thigh to push yourself to uke to decap him that was mad cool
you hit yourself in the head afterword which made you look like a scrub though
spinaroony was fun
overall I think there needs to be a little more attention on the movements so you can get higher speeds but lots of originality in there.