the electricity swarming through his hands looks more like a bracelet of sorts. try and make it look more "scraggly", if you catch my drift. the left leg is too big, or the right leg is too small, or a bit of both. the background is great, 'cpet for the gray thing sticking out on the right side. his torso is messed up sorta' too. he'd look a lot more badass with a rock-hard set of abs (you should the knot on his waist to center the muscles) and a pair of smoking pecs to boot(no homo). ive never seen a raven with a giant pointed head either. it would look better, in my opinion, if you rounded thato ut a little so it looked more like he was "wearing" a giant raven head. but i can see how it would wor like that if it wasn't mask tho. i dont really like what you did with the right wing. the longest feather should be as distal (anatomy term for far out) as possible. the right hand looks a little too feminine (more scragglyness). maybe add a scabbard or something. you could make it look more smexy if you exaggerate the lighting fro the electricity ball to kind of add a centerpeice to the whole thing. the belt could be thicker around the waist, too - that would be cool. maybe give him a some samurai pants instead. the right leg needs to be teensy bit lighter. still tough, what you have so far is a masterpiece. keep it up
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