No offense but that wasn't nice much.Was a little bit slow.And you could have made more boomshots in every DM you did.Also,you weren't controlling the whole body.Like the part when you kicked uke's arm for the first time,your hands were still.And they did not move at all.And also the replay was a kinda stiff.You should try relaxing more.And be creative.It's just the same idea of many other replays of tori killing uke.Make new ideas for your replays.Like Using uke's arm as a weapon against him,or maybe throw the remaining part of uke and then kick it while it's in the air.Stuff like that would make the watcher impressed.so,7/10.
Ok i made a new replay.I know it is not perfect but i would like to see your point of view.I know it's a bit grabby but i had to do it to keep uke close to me.here it is anyways: