Originally Posted by Drakeco

Legendary clan story
-It was a cold day…not because of the weather, which was cool, but because of the atmosphere…
Dima town turned into complete dust…into a ghost town.
All the effort troops put into fight, was not enough to defeat the worldДs enemy.
The big red eyed cyclone stepped into the city like humans were ants, and as if buildings were mere flowers. All hope was lost. I can remember the first days of this madness…A unknown flying object reaching the cityДs mountain peak. Seemed nothing to worry about, until we saw a little spark coming from the mount. A little creature came down of the aircraft, and since by then no one knew what it were…they thought it was an illusion. But I didn’t, I knew something like this would happen one day, something you would think about only in movies. After a month, everyone was a witness. It came down the mount and started destroying infrastructures, murdering people, with no rest. Troops were deployed into the area, tanks, jets, missiles, but nothing could stop him…I knew that in order to destroy something big and surreal, you required something bigger and surreal…The idea of thinking about something like this was surreal itself..
Enough past, I need to focus about the future…it’s time for me to save the world! I havenДt been training 10 years for nothing…I finally feel sure about my aura skills. My power and my sword, will stop this!-
The worthy fighter, L3rk, took the katana from his cupboard, and suited up with his neon green armour. It seemed everything was ready, so he set himself to war.
-I can’t do this alone…I need some help. I better go seek for them.-
L3rk went into the dusk-like city again, and walked carefully to the meeting up basement. Fortunately, one of his friends was there.
-Hey Emoteal, let’s go…I suppose you are ready?-
Emoteal nods. He is unfortunately muted by a pact with another’s planet God, in exchange for his power.
-Well, letДs do this. I suppose you are also ready Trooper?-
-No need to answer…I may have no eyes, but I knew you were here since you entered through that door. Let’s go.-
The three fighters go to battle…they unleashed their katanas, and unleashed their power. The battle was tough…The cyclone was very strong…
-We must unify our forces to beat him…LetДs unleash all we have now!-
At the count of three, they swung their katanas from opposite direction, but all aiming at the cyclone’s eye. A bright spark of red light came from the cyclone’s eye, and the giant monster disappeared in a powerful beam of darkness.
Finally, the chaos was over… The earth was safe, and it was thanks to L3rk, Emoteal and Trooper …however, nobody knows them…nobody knew them…they will remain as a legend…just something Legendary.

Originally Posted by DeakManiac

Shit, I could of did one just as good for free.

Originally Posted by Drakeco

Probably so, but his is detailed an nice grammar. Its perfect.

Originally Posted by DeakManiac

An age of era has come to play in the ToriBash planet. They have risen from the dead like all Legends would, and in a matter of time they became offical. As a kindly ferious way, they vanquish any enemy in sight. They never die because everyone knows how the "Legends" roll. L3rk, the leader of it all, was banned but still fought back proving that theory. Everyone who quits is always an legend. Reconized as a supreme ordeal of cofidence. They are a type of group that could care less what people think. Walking through the shadows, beating everyone they can, testing everyones skills and reconizing who is a Legend and who isn't. It's the job of the skilled. Who doesn't want to be a legend? Be known as a god of conquer, god of the Toribash, one of a kind? Life may seem difficult, but being in legend, you know you have family and friends. Unite as one and become a group of the best, unite as a family and become the group of the greatest.


Didn't even take long, proper grammar and all.

I write storys for crying out loud, how hard is it to do a clan story? I could make a 5 page story for this clan as much as I know about it.

Originally Posted by Xipherion

WOW! how much did you get for English?