i should mention that this was my last application

I don't know if this is late, but i would like to keep my current Application.

hi.

They're decent, but not quite there I'm afraid


I like the second one tho! Gonna be a no from me

:с

Well I'm done fuckin around and being lazy lmao. So i took Oscar100 advice to create something "cleaner" and it took me a while since being messy is my talent. I also practiced Ukebash lately so you could slapp my ass if sparring is not your liking.


I would be happy being part of ORMO

lazy big moment lmao

EvilTorified:

oh sorry took so long, had exams lol.


ok lets see, I found the first and third replay to be really nice, but I didn't really care for the 2nd one tbh. You can post one more replay and I'll make my decision!


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KillerBotx:


Replay 1: Ou I like the speed on the opener, dms weren't too shabby either. Combo flowed pretty well imo. Others would prob dock you on the weird positions mid transitions but like I do worse ones so I can't comment on those lol


Replay 2: The idea is good but the execution is kinda wonky, flow kinda gets jittery and fully contracted heels looks quite bad to me. The dms were ok tho. Transitions can be better for this one, a noticeable one is weird arm movements in the opener. cool pose tho


Replay 3: Nice dms, I like this one a lot better than the 2nd one! Flow was pretty good here, although some of the motions could have been a lot cleaner. Like the forearm thing into uke's head didn't like that


The best of the bunch would definitely be the first one. The third one isn't too bad either and would be passable for me.


2nd one however is draggin' ya down so like the dude before ya I'll wait for one more since you're pretty close.

ok here's another then

ye you're good, get in here

yes.