Cnced already in your replay thread ^
Btw Plata, since you asked me to cnc your replays I'll do it.
I'll cnc the second one since the first replay idk why I can't see it nicely, error and lag twitch stuff.
Well for the golden ticket.
The opener and the beginning of the replay was actually pretty basic, nothing really special though, the run was alright. Hits that you did were nice in my opinion, I think all the kicks should be done cleaner and smoother, it seems like your hit was a bit messy though even it still looked good. Also It seems like you grab too long, didin't really like it too much, you should change your grab direction and then did a kick combination, that woul be great, better than keep grapping uke like that.
Also It seems like you moved uke a bit in the beginning(or it just a twitch idk), to be honest I didin't like it though.
it was a pretty good wip, you should continue it.