Strange opinions. But okay. Then take "Siegesverhфltnis"?

I found something other,

Keyword: STATEKEY5
Language: EU-ITALIAN
current translation: \\\\bnuovo gioco \\\\asalva \\\\1prossimo\\\\2precedent
problem: someone missed a letter (precedent means nothing in italian)
correct translation: \\\\bnuovo gioco \\\\asalva \\\\1prossimo\\\\2precedente

Keyword: TBC24_MALLOC_ERROR
Language: EU-ITALIAN
current translation: Fuori dalla memoria RAM
problem: "Fuori" is used for places, and RAM is not a place.
correct translation: Senza memoria RAM


Keyword: REPLAYER3
Language: EU-ITALIAN
current translation: Titolo invalido. Solo caratteri da[0-9A-Z] e [-_.] sono disponibili
problem: In italian usually the verb doesn't go at the end of a phrase.
correct translation: Titolo invalido. Sono disponibili solo caratteri da [0-9A-Z] e [-_.]

About this one: "Titolo" sounds not so good and I can't find another word to say it, I would write "nickname" or "username" in italian too.

I think I can't find and correct no more errors, I tried to be helpful :)

Keyword: FRIENDMSG4
Language: EU-ITALIAN
current translation: La lista di amici ш al momento bloccata.Riprovare piљ tardi.
problem: Missed a space in the dot and "Riprovare" and in Italian we don't use "La lista di amici".
correct translation: La lista amici ш al momento bloccata. Riprovare piљ tardi.

Keyword: FRENDMSG5
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: La lista di amici ш piena.
problem: Another problem of "La lista di amici".
correct translation: La lista amici ш piena.

Keyword: MENUTXT8
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: Uscire dalla guida
problem: It's better "Uscire dal tutorial".
correct translation: Uscire dal tutorial

Keyword: MENUTXT70
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: Cinutra
problem: It's "Cintura", not "Cinutra"
correct translation: Cintura

Keyword: SCRIPT_MSG0
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: spingere le Control Stick verso l'alto basso, mentre lo tenete
problem: It's wrong in the part of "Verso l'altro basso" and "le" it's not appropriate to Control Stick.
correct translation: Spingere il Control Stick Verso l'alto o verso il basso mentre lo tenete.

Keyword: SCRIPT_MSG5
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: usare le Control Sitck per selezionare
problem: Another problem of "Le"
correct translation: Usare il Control Stick per selezionare

Keyword: SCRIPT_MSG9
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: usare le Control Stick per selezionare
problem: Another problem of "le"
correct translation: Usare il Control Stick per selezionare.


For now I found these, tomorrow I'll find another.

Keyword: FRIENDCODE
Language: US-FRENCH
current translation: Mon Code Ami
problem: Missing ' d' '
correct translation: Mon Code d'ami

Keyword: TUT_CAMERA7
Language: USA-ENGLISH
current translation: Congratulations! camera control success
problem: need capital 'C' after '!'
correct translation: Congratulations! Camera control success

Keyword: TUT_JOINT_SEL5
Language: USA-ENGLISH
current translation: Good Job! you have gone through all 20 joints and 2 hands
problem: need capital 'Y' after '!'
correct translation: Good Job! You have gone through all 20 joints and 2 hands

Keyword: TUT_CAMERA7
Language: UK-ENGLISH
current translation: Congratulations! camera control success
problem: need capital 'C' after '!'
correct translation: Congratulations! Camera control success

Keyword: TUT_JOINT_SEL5
Language: UK-ENGLISH
current translation: Good Job! you have gone through all 20 joints and 2 hands
problem: need capital 'Y' after '!'
correct translation: Good Job! You have gone through all 20 joints and 2 hands

Keyword: TUT_JOINT_CHNG12
Language: UK-ENGLISH
current translation: good job! that's how you control the joints the art of fighting lies in joint rotation.
problem: need capital 'T' after '!', needs 'and' after 'joints'
correct translation: good job! That's how you control the joints and the art of fighting lies in joint rotation.

Keyword: TUT_JOINT_CHNG12
Language: USA-ENGLISH
current translation: good job! that's how you control the joints the art of fighting lies in joint rotation.
problem: need capital 'T' after '!', needs 'and' after 'joints'
correct translation: good job! That's how you control the joints and the art of fighting lies in joint rotation.

Ill find more if these are correct

Keyword: TUT_CAMERA4
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: bene! Usa le Control Stick e \\\\zzooma vicino e lontano
problem: Same problem here. "le" it's wrong for "Control Stick".
correct translation: Bene! Usa il Control Stick e \\\\zzooma vicino e lontano

Keyword: TUT_JOINT_SEL4
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: le giunture sono selezionate utilizzando le Control Stick del Nunchuk.
problem: Hum, another problme of "le"
correct translation: Le giunture sono selezionate utilizzando il Control Stick del Nunchuk.

Keyword: TUT_CAMERA4
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: bene! Usa le Control Stick e \\\\zzooma vicino e lontano
problem: Another problem of "le"
correct translation: Bene! Usa il Control Stick e \\\\zzooma vicino e lontano

Keyword: TUT_CAMERA6
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: bene! Usa le Control Stick e \\\\calza la telecamera
problem: Another problem of "le"
correct translation: Bene! Usa il Control Stick e \\\\calza la telecamera

Keyword: TUT_JOINT_SEL4
Language: EU-Italian
current translation: le giunture sono selezionate utilizzando le Control Stick del Nunchuk
problem: Another problem of "le"
correct translation: Le giunture sono selezionate utilizzando il Control Stick del Nunchuk

Keyword: TUT_camera3
Language: UK-English US English
current translation: "zoom into the 2 characters."
problem: Gives the impressions of zooming inside the Toris bodies. Also the wording is confusing.
correct translation: "Zoom in on either character."

Keyword: TUT_CAMERA7
Language: UK-English USA-English.
Current translation: Congratulations! Camera control success.
Problem: Camera control success is not a logical sentence.
correct translation: Congratulations! You have mastered the camera
(the correct translation is an approximation, there are lots of options, but that one is less wordy)

Keyword: TUT_JOINT_CHNG3
Language: UK-English USA-English.
Current translation: "A joint can rotate in 2 opposite directions.
Problem: Technically it works, but saying "A joint" is vague and since it is an action it should be written like one.
Correct translation" Each joint can be rotated in 2 opposite directions.

Keyword: TUT_JOINT_CHNG12
Language: UK_English USA_English
Current translation: "Good job! Thats how you control the joints the art of fighting lies in joint rotation."
Problem: Run-on sentence.
Correct translation: Good job!! That's how you control the joints. The art of fighting lies in joint rotation.

Keyword: TUT_BADYROT5
Language: UK-English USA-English
Current translation: "Now lets use your sternum.
Problem: in the previous message it is called "the sternum", switching to "your sternum" is confusing and awkward sounding.
Correct translation: Now lets use the sternum.

Keyword: TUT_DQ5
Language: UK-Englsih USA-English.
Current translation: dojo impact: any bodypart other than hands and feet hit the ground causes disqualification! !!
Problem: Awkward language use.
Correct translation: dojo impact: if any body part other than the hands or feet hit the ground you will be disqualified!! !

Keyword: TUT_DECAP3
Language UK-English USA-English.
Current translation: Awesome! You've caught.. a head!
Problem: Double period. Makes people think it is an ellipses (...) which is used to show either omitted words or trailing off for a short time. Also "a head" gives the impression that there was more than one head that could be caught.
Correct translation: Awesome! You've caught the head!

Keyword: TUT_GHOST9 through TUT_GHOST11
Language: UK-English USA-English.
Problem: All three of these messages say essentially the same thing, in different words.
Correct translation: Either omitting two of them or changing two of them to say something unrelated to the ghost acting as a preview tool (maybe mention that you can customize its color).

Keyword: TUT_FORCED1
Language: UK-English USA-English
Current translation: For more tutorials, go to tutorial under main menu
Problem: go to should be select.
Correct translation For more tutorials, select tutorial under main menu


That's all I found on a first scan. A lot of them are barely mistakes, but you asked for meticulousness, and from experience I can say that it is always noticeable when non-native English speakers write the words in a game. Usually because of mistakes that only a native speaker would be likely to catch...plus I'm getting thousands of dollars in debt to study this sort of thing :P so when I want to be I can do ok with it.

This sentence is correct ; btw, Stick Directionnel sounds much better than Levier de controle.

Hampa, where is my tc? :<

Keyword: REPLAYER7
Language: UK-English, USA-English
Current translation: Hair Cut!
Problem: Capitalization
Correct translation: Hair cut!

Keyword: Line 421 WII
Language: UK-English AND USA-english
current :WІІ
problem: I's are wrong
correct translation:WII


Keyword: Opponent's line 499
Language: UK-English
current :opponent's
problem: No '
correct translation:opponents


Keyword: rotating your body..... LINE 469
Language: UK-English AND USA-english
current :rotating your body ...
problem: capital not on rotating
correct translation:Rotating your body ...