The replays were really poorly aimed. Your biggest problem is that you have no aiming.
And the second biggest problem I can see is that your flow is a bit twitchy.
Overall, you have improved I guess.
Now I had a long break so dont judge me that hard :S
Hey hey hey. Old spar + sp replay, from when I used to be in TSL (Toribash Sparring League). Unfortunately I lot all of my decent spars when I upgraded to 3.9 last year..
Enjoy!