Work on your realism.
The corkscrews looked messed up, only due to the fact that you don't have enough momentum to pull it off.
I would advise you to work on your flow. Flow helps out with gaining momentum, and momentum leads to gaining more speed, and speed will lead you to spinning faster and jumping higher in -30.00 and -20.00 gravity.
Nonetheless, the replay was decent. Keep practicing, and good luck.