I edited it for you, but kinda failed.

Well, just an elbow DM isn't enough...
Although thanks for trying.
I guess I will keep that replay until I get a boom out of it.
Here is a tricking replay:

The opener looked a little stiff in your right leg.
That little spin kind of looked like a FeiLong, but my memory of what a FeiLong looks like isn't quite clear. However, it looked a little stiff in the knees. You also went a bit too low imo. The backflip looked okay, but your arms were pretty stiff. Also, they wouldn't move around like that irl.
The landing was a bit strange because you only landed on one foot, and you extended your left knee once it hit the ground which made you twitch a little.
The pose was average.
Try to add some realism in your spin and flips. I'd also suggest doing some realistic tricks instead of just spins. (Like I used to)

WowwOWow
man keep practice and you will get better than me :o
very nice flow and trick
9/10 Oh my god how you are get a better style since our last meeting

I like the replays on here. I'd give these posts with replays a 8.5-10 to all of em.

Thanks everyone,
I'll post more tricking but for now, a -30 madman:

Liked the opener.
First Dm looked kinda pointless.
First boom was mostly not a boom since you could hear 3 joints breaking.
Second boom was much better.
Last Dm's looked really nice and catchy.
Pose was alraight.

8.5/10

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Thats in my language means: Here is the collab replay what you want.

Thanks V,
Finished it and made a dynamic/no-grab madman.
Enjoy:

Nice work bro
9/10 good hits and good flow