Flie:
Opener took a bit too long to get moving.
Fluid transition to the hit, etc.
The hit was powerful, but I would've liked it if your legs followed through after the kicks.
The kick after the first hit was ok, needed that decap though (it may be hard because of your momentum).
Nice pose.
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This one was better than Flie in my opinion.
The opener was a bit stiff, and your wrist touched Uke's pec a little. Doesn't matter too much, but it just makes it look a bit messy.
The boom hit was good looking and pretty powerful.
The decap was good. Kept the flow well.
I think you could've made the transition to the pose a bit less twitchy.
Overall, nice work. Keep it up.
Opener took a bit too long to get moving.
Fluid transition to the hit, etc.
The hit was powerful, but I would've liked it if your legs followed through after the kicks.
The kick after the first hit was ok, needed that decap though (it may be hard because of your momentum).
Nice pose.
Save:
This one was better than Flie in my opinion.
The opener was a bit stiff, and your wrist touched Uke's pec a little. Doesn't matter too much, but it just makes it look a bit messy.
The boom hit was good looking and pretty powerful.
The decap was good. Kept the flow well.
I think you could've made the transition to the pose a bit less twitchy.
Overall, nice work. Keep it up.
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Hmm.
The opener was stiff.
I didn't really like the knee, it would've looked better if you didn't extend it at the same time.
I also didn't like the way Uke's head kind of rolled off your arm.
Not a whole lot to Cnc. It was a bit too short for me.
The opener was stiff.
I didn't really like the knee, it would've looked better if you didn't extend it at the same time.
I also didn't like the way Uke's head kind of rolled off your arm.
Not a whole lot to Cnc. It was a bit too short for me.
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