Secret Santa 2024
Originally Posted by dengue View Post
My wip:

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Looks great though, you powerful competitor. It looks a little anime / manga, but it will be hard to beat you anyway.

Here my work, have not forgotten anything? I'll make more accurate.

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Last edited by Berc; Apr 19, 2013 at 03:13 PM.
I'll make a decision either today or in the next few days on the 50k request. Dengue's looks great, but Berc's has work to be done.

Berc: The face was going well, but the additions of darkness and the glowing of the eye haven't panned out well. I suggest when you do textures while following a reference, that you look more closely at it, and follow most details. The hair doesn't fall over the human side, but instead the beast side. There is a divide between where the darkness begins, and where the glowing effect begins. The hair; well I'm not sure what to say about it. I suggest you look in the mirror and look at your own hair, or an image online. The mapping of the darkness on the top of the head (on the hair) isn't great. The darkness remains on the face, it doesn't affect the hair as much as you've done.

If you would like, after reading this, to try and fix it, then I will wait.
I will try a last attempt, I think. If it fails, I'll sell the head. Of course dengue has more experience at this than I am.
I'm in on the 30k one
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