I think Mocucha did a rather good job of handling some of the more useless comments so I'll refrain from deleting too much
That said remember to respect the opinion of the video creator, even if you do not agree with him
Anyway cnc
I think the final video is much better than the wip
The camerawork in many of the clips seems rather boring/stationary, especially in the tricking/madman ones
Some of the effects were interesting at first but got slightly dull the third or fourth time you played it
For some of the replays you let them run on for too long (For example, the dancing/tricking replay at 1:00)
I highly suggest getting RSMB and rendering at only 30fps, this will make the lag when you slow it down less noticeable
I think you're improving, you've just got to keep trying
Good job on this one