judging by chicken's facial expression he is drunk or really sad

It's more of a non-caring facial expession...
Yea, I know I failed.

Going to try to upload the first chapter today. It's really short, but it's done. All I have to do is type it.

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and I dont think its bad its pretty cool tho

Ok I'm not going to be able to post first chapter today, but I will be able tomorrow. The reason being is because I have a time limit and I won't finish within that time limit today, but I'm 3/4 complete, so I be able by tomorrow (hopefully...)

Dang I find drawing lips damn hard, that looks great. You just keep surprising me, nicely done, your going to turn me into a manga fan.

we will see first chapter today ^^

It's like Christmas, I want to open my manga now! pleeeeease.

I so damn lazy. I promised ya'll this long time ago. But this and that happened and I didn't feel like finishing, but I'm finally done. And now for your viewing pleasures.






Quick notes on chapter:
1. I made this a very modern setting a bit of futal era twang.
2. Guns have long time ago fell off. There are only a few left in the world and no one really uses them; everyone has reverted back to blades and hand-to-hand combat (my dream world)
3. I gave Powas a little more sense of responsibility than he really has, but eventually I will work him into the point of the Powas we know and love today.
4. Headquarters are all basically the same (dojo/inn-styled buildings), except they are edited to clan preferences. BoD's base has night-club, dark blue aura feel to it.
5. I wanted to make this chapter short. It just an exposition.
6. (Most important) Remember in half novel and half script style. You'll note that in the beginning's description of BoD. Character dialouges are alse written in script form, so it may take some getting used to.

HOPE YOU ENJOY!!!

Please leave comments and suggestions on it. I'll try to edit it your preferences, if suggestions are good. Thank you, have a nice day

but i want say... Great Good job :P

Lol, does, like, no one care about this anymore?