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The opener was eh, you just jumped towards uke and knee'd him, your wrist twitched and your head looked wobbly. I like the jump you did towards uke after that, it got you into a great position to continue the manip. sadly, you didn't do much though. uke was just floating on your back without much speed. When doing manips, be careful to not hit your head on uke because it looks ugly. The transition to the split was pretty cool. The split looked powerful and the torso grab was well placed imo. I enjoyed the torso kick but the setup was so good that it had potential for more dms

nice replay overall, just try to make your manips more interesting to watch
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opener felt awkward to me but you got some nice flow off of it. the movement into the boom was good and you flowed into a pose.
I would've liked you going for some more dm's after that boom though.

nice replay.
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I've used this replay to get into team madman before I posted it here so... Plus it's not even a madman. I could create madman, with a boomhit included later.
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not bad man

pretty decent movement for the most part although you were stiff transitioning from your opener. I'd suggest you lower your arm a bit and relax the elbow and the knees when you spin to make it look more natural.

when your leg hit the floor you lost a good bit of your momentum, if you are going to do something like that I'd suggest making sure you are able to build up momentum afterwards with something like a kick-off or something.

those little hits were cool, but nothing too too impressive.

like I said, relax your appendages. It makes replays look a lot better.

split was cool, rather messy but still cool. I see an opportunity for a double core if you know what I mean

last kick was well placed.


nice job man! And congrats on getting in the org!!
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This is probably one of the most helpful CnC's I could get. Thanks man, I'll be relaxing some stuffs. Thanks for the CnC Jingles.
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New replay. Manipulation sequal ;O
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Last edited by Rolandman; Jan 14, 2014 at 06:16 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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Pretty nice replay, good kicks, but the manip was way to simple and the opener pretty simple 8.5/10 ;)
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New replay. Manipulation, madman and Boomhit included. gg world. CnC well.
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Made this a few days ago, I don't got another replay to add.
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