nice work dud.
Spins are really nice, but they feel a bit undecisive at some points, not a fan of the one @320 ie. Setup could be better. Spin itself is stiff, and you don't land very nicely.
First kick is twitchy as fuck. Either contract or extend the knee, not both! Also I don't think that grab was needed much. Work on the setup a lot when doing those hook kicks, and make sure you time the kick itself and joints will rain from the sky.
Decap was sexy af, nothing wrong there.
At pose you changed direction of momentum, please don't end up like uncle Swepples.
7/10 - Over-all it's dope af. Work on the spins and perfect them.
PS. I've seen a recurring style while looking at your replay. You always, without exception, spin around the same direction before dm'ing uke, doing another spin and then moving to the decap. Mess it up, do things differently! Half of my replays are experimental shit that I just built upon later. Mess around with openers and try to do that special thing once in a while!
Spins are really nice, but they feel a bit undecisive at some points, not a fan of the one @320 ie. Setup could be better. Spin itself is stiff, and you don't land very nicely.
First kick is twitchy as fuck. Either contract or extend the knee, not both! Also I don't think that grab was needed much. Work on the setup a lot when doing those hook kicks, and make sure you time the kick itself and joints will rain from the sky.
Decap was sexy af, nothing wrong there.
At pose you changed direction of momentum, please don't end up like uncle Swepples.
7/10 - Over-all it's dope af. Work on the spins and perfect them.
PS. I've seen a recurring style while looking at your replay. You always, without exception, spin around the same direction before dm'ing uke, doing another spin and then moving to the decap. Mess it up, do things differently! Half of my replays are experimental shit that I just built upon later. Mess around with openers and try to do that special thing once in a while!
Last edited by Swepples; Feb 22, 2016 at 01:39 PM.
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Thank you uncle swepples! I see the recurring style thing, i mostly don't pay attention to my replays until i watch it from ppls point of view, i'll pay attention to details like that next time because i'm mostly just "clickity clack ooh this looks good" *moves on, anyways, thanks for the cnc!
