Kitten's foot is backwards.
I like my pose, for the glass I was thinking something like this though. What I have now looks like a martini glass.
Great progress on it.
It would be perfect if he made my pose somewhat like this:
lol
And moved me a little bit to the left, closer to Pal... Maybe behind him? ^^
What I think looks wrong:
-The banner. I think it would be better to have it on the center.
-As huc said the shadows look too harsh.
-My lighting looks out of place. I also would appreciate if you changed my pose to this, leaning to the banner on the center.