Toribash
cant say much other than try to get more speed into your moves.
ill also note that during the first spin you stopped and then continued going which didnt look that good.
other than that i could only complain about the gravity, but other than that its really good
gj
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shit son
opener was nice, nothing wrong with it
first dm was ok
the back kick boom was great
last boom was greater
nice other stuff
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O i am amaze

the opener was really fuckin noice. great spins
the foot grab hing is awesome
the punch is also great
the elbow dm was eh
the hook was awesoemeom
the core was nice
the decap was a little anti climactic
the skeet was ok
nice breaky dancey stuff at the end.
the pose is niec
9.6/10 gggg
opener was quite stiff and slow,but spinny

liked the elbow dm and the following transition

at ~420 you take a really long break before that dm

skeet was a bit too much imo,quite pointless

breakdancing moves are fire

and i noticed your tori being weird sometimes cuz of lumbar bending the wrong way

like in the pose

it's a pretty replay tho gj
Giving a "hand" for skeets.
Established that you're completely surpassing me at almost Everything now



The tricks are Clean, speedy and flowfull

Just great.


Try to get more interesting tricks, only thing i can Point out really
Jun 2, 2023 - .best. day. ever.
Yes, why would one name their child Dick?
The answer is 42. (I had to do it)

So tricking is good and it flows quite well but after watching a few of your replays I've noticed, like Xioi said, that the tricks aren't particularly interesting nor fun to watch. Meaning it doesn't really need a second viewing. But then I see all the interesting stuff you've done in the Tricktionary and I ask myself why the fuck wouldn't he include those tricks within combos here?

So Mack.
Why not?
Because I'm a lazy prick basically. I spend about as much time on the tricktionary tricks as I do on the full combo replays. I'll look into making some super advanced tricking shit soon though.

Here's a quick retarded replay I made.
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Mack - [M] - Medieval.rpl (197.4 KB, 52 views)
|Opener by Xioi|#KillTheScootCork|
|Replays|
"Cool delfin med solglajjor" -Larfen
That 'cartwheel' looked satisfyingly robotic out to me. idk

I liked it. Minor flaws with rushing etc
but simple n nice. Gj
Jun 2, 2023 - .best. day. ever.