The boom was really cool.
Opener was amazing.
The walking looked cool.
Can't wait for the final product.

9/10


Go and get your ass to my replay thread!

BUMP
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here is my wip remade
it is better

I really like the one-two kick you got in there to finish dismembering his upper body and then you grab his lower body. Hopefully you can get a boom straight up through his glutes. And i really hope youre going to edit out that hand break. Looks really good so far.

Dagreja to be truthfull il probally edit everything after the dm thats justthe way I roll
thanks for the comment

Ill have a self sparr soon guys just gotta get some freckin comments on this

Aw man, that was amazing.
I hope you can make a skeet with that hand you broke.
Can't wait for the final product.

Merry Christmas on you!

new replay if you watch please commentn on this one I want everyone to commentn on
expecially if your good
like largekilla, swexxelite, jaker, oblivion ,larfen, and zalmoxis
if your name is up there you better comment
and anyone else

Looks great. However, there was a useless kick towards the end that did nothing and the pose was too twitchy for my liking. When you began DMing the lower body, I don't know why, but there was just something i didn't like. I'll watch it again to see if i can find it. And that crotch block right there is asking to be skeeted. 8/10 Flow was good. The opener was kinda stiff.
EDIT: I found what i didnt like bout the lower body part. Everything was too extended. But it doesnt look that bad.

You are getting better.
I like that 2 kick combo, but don't hold elbows. Keep them relaxed most of the time.
Also don't do grab punches no one likes them. Non grab punches are better even if you get less dm's with it.
And when you are going to pose, don't change the move (flow, momentum) keep it till you can stop.

Nice replay hug. Try relaxing a bit more.

I was hoping I would not have to bump on this replay
could you guys please do some more comments
thank you