that was ok 7/10

:S k, here's one

not as tutorial

omg pat ur replays r awesome!!!i hope to see u ingame old friend

my old replay editing

The transition to the glute kick was a bit floaty, but that would be hard to avoid anyway.
The kick was okay, but the transition to the next kick was pretty good. The kick itself was a bit too stiff for me.
The abs DM was okay, it was just a grab.
The last kick looked solid, and I liked the grab switch and skeet.

Boom was fairly good but as pusga said, the transition to the glute hit pretty much sucked.
The groin kick could've easliy turned into a boom. I didn't like the other hits, they were too stiff and too grabby, but the flow was pretty okay.
Skeet was good enough, but felt too stiff.
The pose was really sexy.

thx guys, but a CnC for the Pat ~ wonderful lies would be really appreciated

Hits were flowy etc. but you should work on your hits more, too much single DM's that could've been a boom.

.-.

this is newbie for some opinions

EDIT (replay): changed the DM into better thing

That was some alright-ish skeeting.
Pretty good first kick.
The hand throw was good also.
8.5/10
*requesting CnC for the newest replays.