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Originally Posted by J0Y View Post
Looks good, I see it isn't finished yet, no? (can't give the so-called constructive criticism)
How's our vault? No one's playing it last night?

Alright, thanks, also, it's not finished, I have to draw the back and then properly color and shade the head, will probably do it tommorow.
Also, no, I'll "take it for a spin" in a few days, unless Arthur can do it instead of me.
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Originally Posted by nathancash View Post
How much does it cost for a custom head texture?

No idea which one you're taking about.

If you're talking about the item the cheapest one is 2,000tc.
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Seems nice.
At least better than what you drew for me when I asked you ingame to make me a head.


I have an important announcement to make.
I hereby wish to be a permanent member of Arthur's van. I accept the rules and terms. I promise that on decree if anything ever happened to me, I will not hold Arthur responsible. I will never complain even once about whatever goes on in the van. All I ask is to be alone in the van with Maylene.
That is all.
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she'll not rape you.
so there's nothing you can do in the van
except being Arthurs toy.
also I like that head May.
HOOOOOOOOT♥
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Alright, worked on the head a bit, it's not finished though, gotta fix the shading and I have to re-draw some lines.

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So. A wall of criticism incoming.
The lines are boring. you should make them more exciting, put more of a dynamic feeling to them.
the top does not map good. You clearly don't understand the basics of how a texture is mapped on a sphere.
The brush strokes are kinda... dirty... The don't look good and are quite messy.
Scratches look really newb. And well... not good in general. You should study where the scratches are being made more often and how do they reflect the light.
Decals also look kinda ripped off from some texturer I don't remember anymore. Probably Lwafflez or sth...
And the darker shade of yellow looks kinda meh. And is completely unnecessary. ofc.
The splatters look kinda... odd. that leakage on the left side(from my point of view) doesn't look like there's a liquid at all.
The overall shading is also somewhat meh. Too rough and kinda makes it look somewhat plastic.
Also, a really big minus are all those smudges you've made... they are really weird.
Start using layers, goddammit.
Won't even start on telling how boring the overall concept is in general.

Well, at the moment that's it from me. It's still not finished, so try to fix the "mistakes". k?k.
Anyways, it's decent for a beginner. And stuff.
Good job on not giving up.

Also, sorry for me being annoying. And this post most likely just threw some more fuel to the fire of your hatred :>
But it is somewhat the stuff I can say about it without adding any fancy polite shit. It's pointless.
Only by knowing your flaws you can fix them.
and I hope that
<Envity> I see how's this gonna be
doesn't stand for anything silly and unnecessary, won't it?
k.
let it just go away... kinda... :|
whatever.
I know that you don't "forget" things like that easily. k.




and Elvis, lul xddd
I'm quite concerned about your psychical condition after you be in my van. srsly.
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Originally Posted by Arturix3 View Post
So. A wall of criticism incoming.
The lines are boring. you should make them more exciting, put more of a dynamic feeling to them.
the top does not map good. You clearly don't understand the basics of how a texture is mapped on a sphere.
The brush strokes are kinda... dirty... The don't look good and are quite messy.
Scratches look really newb. And well... not good in general. You should study where the scratches are being made more often and how do they reflect the light.
Decals also look kinda ripped off from some texturer I don't remember anymore. Probably Lwafflez or sth...
And the darker shade of yellow looks kinda meh. And is completely unnecessary. ofc.
The splatters look kinda... odd. that leakage on the left side(from my point of view) doesn't look like there's a liquid at all.
The overall shading is also somewhat meh. Too rough and kinda makes it look somewhat plastic.
Also, a really big minus are all those smudges you've made... they are really weird.
Start using layers, goddammit.
Won't even start on telling how boring the overall concept is in general.

Well, at the moment that's it from me. It's still not finished, so try to fix the "mistakes". k?k.
Anyways, it's decent for a beginner. And stuff.
Good job on not giving up.

Also, sorry for me being annoying. And this post most likely just threw some more fuel to the fire of your hatred :>
But it is somewhat the stuff I can say about it without adding any fancy polite shit. It's pointless.
Only by knowing your flaws you can fix them.
and I hope that
<Envity> I see how's this gonna be
doesn't stand for anything silly and unnecessary, won't it?
k.
let it just go away... kinda... :|
whatever.
I know that you don't "forget" things like that easily. k.




and Elvis, lul xddd
I'm quite concerned about your psychical condition after you be in my van. srsly.

Can't shade diffrently - cause I don't know how to.
Also, I have no experience on how to make scratches/armor pierces, this was actually my first try.
Also, using layers, ain't gonna happen.
Decals were made out of scratch, I could change them easily though, decals are the easiest part to draw on a tex, no point in copying them.
By smuding, I tried to make the "used up metal" effect, though, it ended looking like concrete more then metal.
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AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Spanish:

JAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJAJA = twice as annoying.



Anyways c:

I have returned from shooting shit with arrows for a bout five minutes. I shall return when everyone else decides to be not so....

boring...
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Hi nao.



Isolations your signature makes me want to shoot myself. Repeatedly.
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