Clay you still have a problem with the camera movement. What I'd suggest is just find a nice spot (and have it close in too) and stay there, when the next frame comes then relocate to a better angle and freeze there once again.
For me, It's not too distracting and personally I do the same thing, but I'm sure some non-toribash players are looking at it and getting dizzy.
The rest is good, nice video.