Toribash
try to shade with the side of your pencil tip.
You are drawing too wide lines for a finished piece, also try to shade with colors.
Last edited by dengue; Mar 3, 2017 at 06:35 AM.
While your shading is decent, it is a bit misplaced.
I recommend you to try to add some background if you decide to do some art and upload it on for example "DeviantArt".
Since the main focus is the character, don't make the background to detailed.
Your linework is a little bit to thick on the clothes.
That was it for now.
Im just fucking better with some GOOD OL' PENCILS.

First time i'm doing a portrait of someone...

Way down we go

French Player, Old member of OFRO
Yo, lot of stuff to add
lit' af

AvP Fanart


Portrait of a girl I had a crush on


Small manga page attempt


A portrait of a japanese character I made


Small sketch of a character I need to finish omfg


Cyborg-Samourai Guy, like to eat sushi and kill people. Duh


A Cat-Man that is the cook, the waiter and the barman, basically dealing with all those jobs and the customers at the same time


Making my own monsters , the "Murmure" , basically Murmure is the french word for "Whisper"

French Player, Old member of OFRO
If any one can give me out some tips / or where to start to get a black and white comics books inking style...

This inking style if you really don't know (Batman Inking by Rusten)


I mean what do you need to do those kind of inking ? What type of pen / markers ? Really curious and got no idea where to start

Anyway I tried to do something in that style as a quick test

Meh, nailed it I guess

French Player, Old member of OFRO
Holy.. I was so bad, back then.

Well, last post was from 2017.. It's 2019, been two years, I'm currently in a computer graphic-school, hoping to graduate in 2D Animation / Illustration..
I'll post some stuff i've done recently in my free time or for school.

Got really inspired by Mystery-Skull : Hellbent


Sekiro is great, give it a try


Did this for class


Wanted to experiment stuff with brush


I genuily loved the first Pacific Rim movie, so yeah


I made the portrait of someone OC'


More experiments with brush and colors


Wakfu is pretty good


Still more experiments with brush


Quick stuff, like, 8 minutes at most

Did this for class, again


One of my characters




It's honestly a great glow up of how much I've improved.
If you want more context on some of the characters/stuff, I can provide. I also have a twitter acount if people are interested.
French Player, Old member of OFRO