pwn3r:you could have relaxed more on that so it would be more stylish.
Artyst:
holy shit:First,relax more.i didn't see any relaxing in that.Relaxing maxes your moves more stylish and will help you be a better player.Also,you must try to control even many joints than that.All i saw is controlling the hips and shoulders.Try being more brutal.Like start being as much as fast on your joint controlling.you have got many other joints than the hips and shoulders.use them.and don't do moves once in a time.try moving many joints so the move would look crazy and fast.and don't forget to relax.
first good decap:that was a very nice idea of a kick there.but really,you had many chances to split uke and decapitate him.first,don't use both legs and both shoulders all the time.try using the chest,lumbar,glutes,and other joints that you could have used in your replay to make it better.if you didn't already know,you can edit your replays by pressing "E" in the middle of a replay.use this technique to improve your replays.Again,relax more,speed the replays up,use the many joints,and try to make your replays as brutal as possible.
oh yea:meh i'll analyze later...