Toribash
Then i change my mind lol. all those lines just bother me, please change it to whatever form paragraphs are called
Originally Posted by AvaxRetro View Post
About Me

I love playing sports and going outside on the weekends.I am 14 years old.I live in North Carolina (Eastern Time -5)I really like hockey and soccer and I enjoy playing the sport with friends.I go by the name of Retro on games but my real name is Jimmy.I have Skype (Silly skype name I know) Iamawesomebro321

Why I want to join Origin

I happened to play with a member of origin and he directed me to the recruitment players. (How I found the clan)I want to join Origin because the players in the clan are fun to play with and they are talented at the game. I want to join also because I feel that I can excel at my talents as well as learn from other members. I feel that I have room for improvement and I feel that this clan can help with that.

What are my skills in toribash?

I am starting to get into ABD and I am doing good at it. I am still getting the feel for ABD but I will learn fast.I am a judo player but I am finding that ABD suits me a little bit better than judo.I am very good at logic and seeing what will work and what will not work.
I still have some things I need to learn and I will learn that over time. I feel that I am a good player but I have room for improvement.

What are some of my skills?

I can be on everyday (Forums and ingame) I am a positive person and don't like being negative. I look at the good things instead of the bad.



Extra: I lost my main account due to my CPU breaking and I know have a new main account. (Just thought to add it in)

Purple monkeys run wild in the red forest

I hope that helps I removed the spaces so it falls into conformity (invade)
ため、私は王女のクッキーに違反しました
Ok, so, to start off...

What was the name of your old account?? I'd really like to know that, or at least what belt it was.

Other than that, I feel you did pretty well, and according to cat4hbk, you tested well in ABD.

My vote is a YES
Origin For Life
Originally Posted by AvaxRetro View Post
About Me

I love playing sports and going outside on the weekends.

I am 14 years old.

I live in North Carolina (Eastern Time -5)

I really like hockey and soccer and I enjoy playing the sport with friends.

I go by the name of Retro on games but my real name is Jimmy.

I have Skype (Silly skype name I know) Iamawesomebro321

Why I want to join Origin

I happened to play with a member of origin and he directed me to the recruitment players. (How I found the clan)

I want to join Origin because the players in the clan are fun to play with and they are talented at the game.

I want to join also because I feel that I can excel at my talents as well as learn from other members.

I feel that I have room for improvement and I feel that this clan can help with that.

What are my skills in toribash?

I am starting to get into ABD and I am doing good at it.

I am still getting the feel for ABD but I will learn fast.

I am a judo player but I am finding that ABD suits me a little bit better than judo.

I am very good at logic and seeing what will work and what will not work.

I still have some things I need to learn and I will learn that over time.

I feel that I am a good player but I have room for improvement.

What are some of my skills?

I can be on everyday (Forums and ingame)

I am a positive person and don't like being negative.

I look at the good things instead of the bad.



Extra: I lost my main account due to my CPU breaking and I know have a new main account. (Just thought to add it in)

Purple monkeys run wild in the red forest

It's not because she looks big that she's good, you need to know that.
It's a No for me :x
Sorry for making my app like that, I have revised and added more to it and I hope it is better now. Please go read it again.
Last edited by AvaxRetro; May 21, 2016 at 12:02 AM. Reason: I had to edit
hmm the app is a bit better avax but still none of your skills are an actual skill but i still like it more this time due to the format being a bit easier to read and you adding more i will have to say yes now
Originally Posted by AvaxRetro View Post
About Me

I love playing sports and going outside on the weekends. I am 14 years old. I live in North Carolina (Eastern Time -5) I really like hockey and soccer and I enjoy playing the sport with friends. I go by the name of Retro on games but my real name is Jimmy.I have Skype (Silly skype name I know) Iamawesomebro321. I started playing soccer when I was 8 and my team won our playoff game and won the championship for that park. I really like playing hockey on the Xbox 360 and I am fairly good at it. I love to be playing video games with friends while having a good time. I am going to be going into the marketing and principles of business in high school. After this school year ends I will be in high school. I will be trying out for the soccer team while I am there and see if I can make it. I play goalie and Mid-Field in soccer. I enjoy playing with friends and having a good time and even if we don't win the game I just enjoy playing with friends and having fun. My favorite color is red and I never really knew why I liked it. It just was appealing to my eye I guess. I would be playing hockey in the winter but every club is in Raleigh and we can't really drive out that far every week for a game or practice so I have to wait until I am old enough to drive. I am a relaxed person and I do not get mad a lot. That is some info about me! I would add more but I don't want to ramble on.

Why I want to join Origin

I happened to play with a member of origin and he directed me to the recruitment players. (How I found the clan) I want to join Origin because the players in the clan are fun to play with and they are talented at the game. I want to join also because I feel that I can excel at my talents as well as learn from other members. I feel that I have room for improvement and I feel that this clan can help with that. I also want to join so I have people to play with when I get on. I feel that I can help make everyone happy when we play.


What are my skills in toribash?

I am starting to get into ABD and I am doing good at it. I am still getting the feel for ABD but I will learn fast. I am a judo player but I am finding that ABD suits me a little bit better than judo. I am very good at logic and seeing what will work and what will not work. I still have some things I need to learn and I will learn that over time. I feel that I am a good player but I have room for improvement. I use a variety of openers against opponents.

What are some of my skills?
I am a problem solver and I can help people with their problems. I will be taking marketing and all that in high school so I can help us with advertising and I am also going to take coding classes so I can also help with that. I can get into photo shop if I am needed to make a logo ETC. I can contribute to the clan with my skill and I hope I can be in the wars soon. I can not really think of anything else (I am bad in this kind of category)

School
During school (8-4) I can not play. But during the summer I will be able to play everyday. When school starts back up again I will be in high school and that means more homework. I will try to be on a lot but school has to come first sometimes, but I think I will be able to stay active.

Extra: I lost my main account due to my CPU breaking and I know have a new main account. (Just thought to add it in) (I lost the username and password, Sorry)

Purple monkeys run wild in the red forest

i would have preferred you posted this again instead of editing your post, but thats ok for now.

Now that your app has been redone my vote is a yes
Application 1
Hello [Origin] members and leaders.

Why I want to join [Origin]
I don't have a clan, I don't have past clans either I've been waiting to apply to a good clan. You seem like nice people. I've thought of joining before and now I'm applying now. I am looking for a really cool and skilled clan like I said before.

Toribash Experience
I started play toribash in 2014 I'm pretty sure. And I'm only belt. (I took a year off, just putting it out there.) When I started to win I was a white belt, all that I played was Judo because it was easy decap. But now my favorite mods are Mushu, Boxshu, Aikido and Greykido. I love playing this game a lot. I'm not really active on the fourms, but I guarantee I'll get better though. I probs wont post much.

What I can do for the clan
I guess I could do clan wars and be friendly on the fourms cause I will be on the a lot more now.

Me
My real life name is Brodie. I live in QLD, Australia, I had Skype but I got hacked.... My steam is Brodes17 and the picture is nothing. I have an Xbox 360 and the account name is TheGamingWolfPlayz I like archery and defiantly playing video games. I'm a nice person, I don't rage.

Hope I get into this awesome clan [Origin], Thanks.

purple monkeys run wild in the red forest
Originally Posted by BROBRO221 View Post
Hello [Origin] members and leaders.

Why I want to join [Origin]
I don't have a clan, I don't have past clans either I've been waiting to apply to a good clan. You seem like nice people. I've thought of joining before and now I'm applying now. I am looking for a really cool and skilled clan like I said before.

Toribash Experience
I started play toribash in 2014 I'm pretty sure. And I'm only belt. (I took a year off, just putting it out there.) When I started to win I was a white belt, all that I played was Judo because it was easy decap. But now my favorite mods are Mushu, Boxshu, Aikido and Greykido. I love playing this game a lot. I'm not really active on the fourms, but I guarantee I'll get better though. I probs wont post much.

What I can do for the clan
I guess I could do clan wars and be friendly on the fourms cause I will be on the a lot more now.

Me
My real life name is Brodie. I live in QLD, Australia, I had Skype but I got hacked.... My steam is Brodes17 and the picture is nothing. I have an Xbox 360 and the account name is TheGamingWolfPlayz I like archery and defiantly playing video games. I'm a nice person, I don't rage.

Hope I get into this awesome clan [Origin], Thanks.

purple monkeys run wild in the red forest

I say no. Almost no information (atleast you included the most important things) but looking at your application i dont really see work put in. That's a 3-5 min application.
F I L T H Y.
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