You move pretty fluidly when you want to, but you just DM once, often just a single limb and with no particular quirks and call it a day, not even bothering to pose. Typical beginner mistake. Also, you sometimes forget about joints you don't actively need, which results in rigid legs and arms sticking out. Some people recommend always relaxing joints you don't need, I personally recommend paying attention to every joint and making full use of the whole Tori.
That all said, you do get some nice boomhits, and as I said, you dance well. You have a humongous attitude problem though. Aren't extra accounts against the rules? Stupid of you to keep using the same thread when your first acc gets banned. Apparently this forum is hardly moderated at all now, though, seeing how long you whined for CnC and lashed out at anyone not giving generic praise before your first account was banned.